Story help

[Bitchslapper]

I submitted a story recently and it was rejected due to "excessive violence, snuff, or abuse of characters". The most violence or abuse was some spanking, as far as I can tell. It's not like there was any blood or even breaking the skin. They didn't tell me which part of the story was objectionable.

I checked the guidelines beforehand, but of course they were very vague. I don't get it. Is spanking not acceptable? I've seen worse than that in stories posted on the Literotica site, so they must be refering to something else.

I was wondering, is it alright if I post the story here to see what you guys think or is anyone willing to recieve it in a private message?

 

[whispering_surrender]

I would be willing to give it a look if you wanted me to. Either through PM or you can cut and paste to an email. whispering_surrender@yahoo.com. Either one works for me.

Whisper

 

[raphy]

Sure, feel free to PM me. I'll give it a once through for ya.

 

[Bitchslapper]

Alright, I'll PM to both of you. Although, I should warn you, it's a nonconsent story. I thought it was mild compared to some, but apparently the Editors didn't think so. But I digress.

 

[whispering_surrender]

Well, bring it on, and we'll see what happens. *smile*

Whisper

 

[Bitchslapper]

Alright, both PMs have been sent.

It might take you awhile to read it. It's rather long and ponderous, but this is my first erotic story.

 

[whispering_surrender]

You should find my comments in your PM box. Hope that helps.

Whisper

 

[raphy]

Critique sent

 

[Bitchslapper]

Messages recieved, but then by the time you read this, you'll know that already, LOL!

So I guess this post is to let anyone else know who might see this thread that I've already been helped. Thanks, guys. I'll let you know how it turns out.