story feedback?

dreampilot79

Thanks to Rhino for da AV
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I'm rather new here and guess I'm fishing for comments (compliments?)

I have had a couple public comments on one of the stories but none on the others although the voting seems encouraging.

I'd welcome any and all comments on my work and if and where it should go from here.

Dreampilot 79

Movie day (parts 1 and 2)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=162577

Thanks in advance for any comments
 
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