Story Feedback Road to the Sun ch. 05

[IrreverentRev]

Chapter 05 went up today, https://www.literotica.com/s/road-to-the-sun-chapter-05-tap-tap-tap It is an incest series between siblings. Seems to be getting more down votes than any other of my chapters.

I do know about people just not liking the subject mater, of incest in general, but I'm not sure if it's that or something wrong the chapter. I would love some feedback on the story.

Thank you for your time.

 

[CyranoJ]

Seems to be getting more down votes than any other of my chapters.

I haven't read any of the other instalments, but if I had to guess I'd say some people are not making it past the extended sombre and rather gory sequence about slain parents that this chapter opens with. Or perhaps they're finding it tonally at odds with the rest of the goings-on. (I wouldn't vote it down on that basis, personally, but then I don't down-vote stories.)