Story Exchange

ProfessorTA

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Hey, I would like to have an exchange of stories if there are any willing writers, you tell me what you want and I tell you what I would like to have written. Mine will involve the GF and a fantasy we share and she will see it.

We're in Vegas and after a lot of drinking we decide to have some more fun and I watch her sitting out at the slots in a skimpy little dress as men come and go. You come and hit on her and she takes a liking to what you are saying and then you offer her money because you think she is a whore. She corrects you immediately but you offer again not caring. In fact you offer more. She considers it and eventually excuses herself to the washroom but comes to talk to me. I say I would love to see it and so she agrees. She returns to you and says yes she will be your whore for the night. You take it from there and detail what you would want to do to her for the money you just paid.

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what ways, can a "hotwife"/"Loving Wife" or sexy GF be spun, so that it sounds new, or fresh?

what ideas do you have?


Hey, I would like to have an exchange of stories if there are any willing writers, you tell me what you want and I tell you what I would like to have written. Mine will involve the GF and a fantasy we share and she will see it.

We're in Vegas and after a lot of drinking we decide to have some more fun and I watch her sitting out at the slots in a skimpy little dress as men come and go. You come and hit on her and she takes a liking to what you are saying and then you offer her money because you think she is a whore. She corrects you immediately but you offer again not caring. In fact you offer more. She considers it and eventually excuses herself to the washroom but comes to talk to me. I say I would love to see it and so she agrees. She returns to you and says yes she will be your whore for the night. You take it from there and detail what you would want to do to her for the money you just paid.

Ask here or send me a PM.
 
This sounds a reasonable plot line, but it would involve the emotions and thoughts of both of the couple, as well as those of the buyer. That really means that it needs to be written in third person omniscient to be convincing to the reader.

Presumably the seller is hidden, at least at the start of the sex session, and that leaves two problems:

1) If the buyer is in charge (who pays the piper calls the tune) the woman goes to his hotel room; he doesn't go to hers, so how does the seller get into hiding where he can see the proceedings?

2) If the buyer suddenly discovers that they are being watched, he could well be less than pleased, and nastiness could ensue?

The way round both of these is that she says she will go with him but that the seller wants to watch. That drops the money offered by a lot, and raises suspicion that this is essentially a robbery scam.
 
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