AWhoopsieDaisy
Just Call Me Daisy
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I wanted to explore a very specific dynamic between two very distinct characters. It's quite difficult to summarize but I'll give it a go:
The old king dies without any heirs and an emergency council elects a court wizard who notoriously dislikes dealing with other people to replace him. Adding the caveat that in order to gain autonomy as ruler he needs an heir in order to keep history from repeating itself. The wizard decides the only logical solution is to get himself an arranged marriage and kill his spouse as soon as the first heir is born so he can go back to being a recluse.
The spouse he ends up with is something of a social Butterfly. Incredibly charming and actively volunteered to marry this asshole. The wizard spends a majority of the time convincing himself he's not going to get attached to someone he's clearly already in love with.
It's 11k words so far and the part that is published is part one of a maximum of 3.
[Link to the Story here]
I mostly want to know if this is something people are actually interested in reading. Especially given that its 11k words and only 2kish of that is explicitly pornographic. With most of the sex happening towards the end. Is this an interesting enough read to hold your interest when porn isn't happening?
I'm very interested to hear what people think of Victor as a person. Does he sound like he loves Lazu or does he come off as a manipulative bastard?
The old king dies without any heirs and an emergency council elects a court wizard who notoriously dislikes dealing with other people to replace him. Adding the caveat that in order to gain autonomy as ruler he needs an heir in order to keep history from repeating itself. The wizard decides the only logical solution is to get himself an arranged marriage and kill his spouse as soon as the first heir is born so he can go back to being a recluse.
The spouse he ends up with is something of a social Butterfly. Incredibly charming and actively volunteered to marry this asshole. The wizard spends a majority of the time convincing himself he's not going to get attached to someone he's clearly already in love with.
It's 11k words so far and the part that is published is part one of a maximum of 3.
[Link to the Story here]
I mostly want to know if this is something people are actually interested in reading. Especially given that its 11k words and only 2kish of that is explicitly pornographic. With most of the sex happening towards the end. Is this an interesting enough read to hold your interest when porn isn't happening?
I'm very interested to hear what people think of Victor as a person. Does he sound like he loves Lazu or does he come off as a manipulative bastard?