angelicminx
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Story Discussion: July 6, 2007. "Now and Forever" by angelicminx
I consider Now and Forever a romance. The story is set in Cherry Hill, New Jersey. I don’t make that clear in the first two chapters, but I may, either in the rewrite or in later chapters. I believe the fact that it is set in Cherry Hill is pertinent to the story. I love the twist at the end of Chapter 1, and have received some positive comments about it. However, that doesn’t mean that I’m married to it, if it means I’ll have a better story by changing it.
A warning for those that may have an issue with male sexual contact; this may not be the story for you. In my effort to not offend readers who don’t care for gay male sex, I’ve toned down those particular scenes and I’ve been told it comes across as avoidance. Any advice there would also be appreciated.
I consider Now and Forever a romance. The story is set in Cherry Hill, New Jersey. I don’t make that clear in the first two chapters, but I may, either in the rewrite or in later chapters. I believe the fact that it is set in Cherry Hill is pertinent to the story. I love the twist at the end of Chapter 1, and have received some positive comments about it. However, that doesn’t mean that I’m married to it, if it means I’ll have a better story by changing it.

A warning for those that may have an issue with male sexual contact; this may not be the story for you. In my effort to not offend readers who don’t care for gay male sex, I’ve toned down those particular scenes and I’ve been told it comes across as avoidance. Any advice there would also be appreciated.
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