Story Discussion: 25 July 2012. "I Know Where Your Tongue Has Been" by bi_cathy
Hi everyone,
I am submitting a story of mine for the first time to the Story Discussion Circle, and I am looking for some honest feedback. It's my 3rd attempt at writing lesbian erotica and the longest I have personally written. It stands at 4 Literotica pages, but it took about 5 months to write.
The reason I wrote this story is because there are lots of stories about lesbians meeting in certains situations (roommates, babysitter, best friends,...) and I wanted to apply my own approach to one of those scenarios.
The specific thing to know about this is that it's written BACKWARDS, ie we start with the last scene and we work our way back, day by day, to the first scene.
Hi everyone,
I am submitting a story of mine for the first time to the Story Discussion Circle, and I am looking for some honest feedback. It's my 3rd attempt at writing lesbian erotica and the longest I have personally written. It stands at 4 Literotica pages, but it took about 5 months to write.
The reason I wrote this story is because there are lots of stories about lesbians meeting in certains situations (roommates, babysitter, best friends,...) and I wanted to apply my own approach to one of those scenarios.
The specific thing to know about this is that it's written BACKWARDS, ie we start with the last scene and we work our way back, day by day, to the first scene.