GeorgiePorgy
Ex-Virgin
- Joined
- Oct 28, 2024
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I’ve (maybe?) wrapped up a series, read it if you like.
Initially, I had challenged myself to take my first 2 stories (Halloween Party and Halloween Party 2), which were from the male protagonist’s point of view, and rewrite them from the female protagonist’s point of view. I had so much fun with that and with exploring Maria’s inner life that the follow-up became its own series and kind of demoted its inspiration to a prequel.
I’d appreciate whatever feedback you have to offer, whether about characters, writing style, seen scenes, jokes, etc. Maria’s mind wanders, especially when she’s horny, so there’s a lot of internal monologue. And she’s cautious enough that there might be too much talk of boundaries and consent, especially for basically a porn story. Also food.
Thank you, experienced readers and writers.
Georgie
Initially, I had challenged myself to take my first 2 stories (Halloween Party and Halloween Party 2), which were from the male protagonist’s point of view, and rewrite them from the female protagonist’s point of view. I had so much fun with that and with exploring Maria’s inner life that the follow-up became its own series and kind of demoted its inspiration to a prequel.
I’d appreciate whatever feedback you have to offer, whether about characters, writing style, seen scenes, jokes, etc. Maria’s mind wanders, especially when she’s horny, so there’s a lot of internal monologue. And she’s cautious enough that there might be too much talk of boundaries and consent, especially for basically a porn story. Also food.
Thank you, experienced readers and writers.
Georgie
