story details, race and profession

[ILienBagby]

a little over a week ago, I wrote a story, "Fucking a Star." In the story, I was careful to NOT specify the race of any of the main three characters. One of the main characters was an athlete, a world-famous athlete, but I did not specify the sport he participated in. I did expect some comments about the lack of race and sport specificity, but none came. I did want (need) comments about the story because it was a departure of sorts to me, heavy on the sex, light on the plot. My question in this post: did the story disappoint? Did the lack of specificity damage the story? Did the emphasis on sex over plot hurt a reader's appreciation of the story? These questions are asked because I would like to write more stories for Literotica, but it is difficult to know what is wanted and what is not wanted in a story. Comments (good or bad) would be GREATLY appreciated

 

[LordMhoram]

a little over a week ago, I wrote a story, "Fucking a Star." In the story, I was careful to NOT specify the race of any of the main three characters. One of the main characters was an athlete, a world-famous athlete, but I did not specify the sport he participated in. I did expect some comments about the lack of race and sport specificity, but none came. I did want (need) comments about the story because it was a departure of sorts to me, heavy on the sex, light on the plot. My question in this post: did the story disappoint? Did the lack of specificity damage the story? Did the emphasis on sex over plot hurt a reader's appreciation of the story? These questions are asked because I would like to write more stories for Literotica, but it is difficult to know what is wanted and what is not wanted in a story. Comments (good or bad) would be GREATLY appreciated

If you are hoping for someone to read your story and comment, might be wise to include a link to it. When asking someone to do you a favor, make it as easy as possible for them to help you

 

[ILienBagby]

lord morham

thanks for the tip.....Here is the link http://www.literotica.com/s/fucking-a-star