story comments?

dreampilot79

Thanks to Rhino for da AV
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I'm relatively new here and I guess i'm fishing for comments (compliments?)

I've written a couple of stories in the last couple months and gotten reasonably good votes but few comments.

I guess i'm just fishing for feedback and an idea if I should keep on writing and if so in what direction?

Any comments would be appreciated

Dreampilot79

Movie day part 2
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=162577

Movie Day
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=153714

The hot tub
http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=152889
 
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