Story:A bet leads to domination in the office

[switch76]

My story has just been accepted. I am fairly new at this so please support the story and add a new thread to it. It is in the BDSM section and is called "A bet leads to domination in the office". Alternatvely click www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=1045
The story is about a male and female co-worker who make a bet leading to one of them being in control of the other for a week, so it can be female domination or male domination.
The story is immersive for men and women.
Put a man's name when asked for first name.
Put a woman's name when asked for last name.
Thanks for reading this and thanks in advance if you write a thread for me.

 

[jakelyon]

Nice Starting Hook

I think this could be a good starting hook. The possibilites are endless as to where this could end up. I look forward to working up something on it.

Thanks.

 

[jakelyon]

Something Else

I just thought of something else. I have not written a thread for an immersive story before. How do you code it to use the immersive feature. If you could direct me to were to find out I would appreciate it.

Thanks.

 

[switch76]

Immersive text

To use the immersive feature for my story type {FIRST_NAME} for the man's name and
{LAST_NAME} for the woman's name. Note: curly brackets, capital letters, underscore must be used.
Details for the immersive feature on this site are also given when you click "Create New Story" on the home page.

 

[switch76]

24th Nov

The story has been updated.
The storyline where the man wins the bet is now
4 pages long thanks to niceguy2002tim.
The thread where the woman wins the bet has been started thanks to jakelyon and is 2 pages deep.

 

[lilguy]

want to add but a bit confuse
Pat the girl right

it hard to do immersive stories when it two sexes because the sex scenes are awcward

 

[jakelyon]

Read Your Way

The best way I have found to get into the flow of the story is to read it first then just continue with the flow. I always have a hard time with immersive stories, and 2nd person stories but if you read the first few pages as you head towards adding a thread I think you will get the flow of it.

I usually add the {FIRST_NAME} references after I have written it so the technical stuff does not break my train of thought. I write in word so I can do a find and replace to get the immersive references just right. It also makes spell and grammer checks much easier.

Just some food for thought.

 

[switch76]

Immersive Text

{FIRST_NAME} or Pat is the man
{LAST_NAME} or Smith is the woman
I hope this helps and I look forward to reading your thread lilguy.
Thanks.

 

[switch76]

27th Nov

A great new thread has been posted by gtsuperdave.
It is in the part of the story where the woman wins the bet. It introduces a new character, Melissa, the hot blonde secretary.

 

[switch76]

1st December

niceguy2002tim has added a thread to the section where the man wins the bet. This makes the story
5 threads deep. The 2 main characters are caught in a comprimising situation by their boss
Mr Wallbanger. What a great name.

 

[switch76]

8th December 2002

Another thread added by niceguy2002tim
Where the man wins the bet, the main couple get caught by his 19 year old secretary Ashley Sloan.
Find out how she reacts.
This makes a 2nd storyline that is 5 threads deep.
Please read the story and add to it.

 

[switch76]

11th Dec

Thanks to lilguy who has added a great thread where the woman wins the bet. I hope you add more threads of this quality. It follows on from gtsuperdave's thread. The woman decides to share her win with secretary Melissa.

 

[switch76]

16th Dec

A new author Uncola Man has added a thread. We find out what Ashley (who is sitting on the desk in her underwear) wants. The guy also gets the choice of one girl or two. The story is now 6 pages long and has 6 different authors.

 

[switch76]

17th Dec

A 7th author AaronWebster has added a thread. It follows on from the encounter in the man's office after the woman has won the bet. The action moves on to her office.
Click options in this order: 2 2
Other latest updates:
1 1 1 2 1 Uncola Man
1 1 1 1 niceguy2002tim
2 1 1 lilguy

 

[switch76]

6th Jan 2003

A new thread by niceguy2002tim . In the section where the man wins the bet, he gets a glimpse of what delights he might get. The action moves to a storage room and the thread ends with a great cliffhanger.
Click options in this order:
1 3

 

[switch76]

7th Jan

A new thread by lilguy. In the section where the woman wins the bet, the man's problems are escalating. The action moves to the appartment shared by the main female character and Melissa. The man has to put on a show for the webcam.
Click options in this order
2 1 1 1
This section is 5 threads deep.

 

[switch76]

12th Jan

An 8th writer has joined the story. fictionalcharctr is a fantastic new author and has added a thread where the main guy has fun with his teenage secretary Ashley.
Click options in this order:
1 1 1 2 2

 

[switch76]

14th Jan

Another great thread from fictionalcharctr.
The main couple enjoy each other in a dark storage closet.
Click options:
1 3 1

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Thanks

Thanks Switch!
I just wanted to say thanks for letting us know about the newest updates. After reading that Fictionalcharacter has added two new threads, following the pervious threads I wrote excites me. I can't wait to read it and see where she's taken the hot young secretary, Ashley and what goes on in the Storage room!

Thanks,
niceguy2002tim
My Stories: A Lost Identity: Sex Fugitive
&
A College girl to be...

 

[switch76]

15th Jan

A new author and friend PhoenixPrime01 has added 3 threads to the story. The man describes what he wants for winning the bet. In the second thread the woman shows off her body in his office and in the 3rd she gives him a blowjob.
For the first of the 3 threads in a row click options:
1 2

 

[switch76]

6th Feb

A nice new thread from a new author Shaggy40uk. In the section where the man wins the bet, he interupts the woman during the blowjob she is giving him. Find out why by clicking options in this order:
1 1 2

 

[switch76]

6th Feb

One of the best threads so far has been added by a new author to the story dashingdevil.
The man and woman are interupted by a knock at the door. The woman has to hide under the desk as her best friend Rebecca walks in.
Don't miss this thread!
Click options in order:
1 2 1 1 1

 

[switch76]

20th Feb

A new thread from a regular contributor niceguy2002tim. Some deep throat action occurs.
Click options:
1 1 3

 

[switch76]

10th March

A new thread by Jakelyon with a good cliffhanger. In the section where the woman wins the bet, the man goes to her office determined not to follow her commands. Will his resolve hold? Find out what happens.
Click options in this order:
2 3