Stories i need input on :)

[neonie]

Hai there guys

I have a few stories up and need some people's input on them, thanks!

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/6002
http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/5271
http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/5792

 

[gizmoo69]

The opening of "A Demon with an Evil Plan":

"A transsexual sex demon suddenly conjures up an evil plan while in the demon realm. The sex demon used to be a war master demon, until she had conquered all there was to conquer, now she has gotten bored and wants to do something fun."

Wow, you really know how to get right to the point!