sexdiamond
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- May 26, 2006
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Good Morning all,
I would like to thank everyone for their comments on my stories. I greatly appreciate all of the feedback, as these stories are my first attempts at erotic writings. I have submitted Ch.03 and it is currently awaiting approval. I hope that everyone will find it to be a grand conclusion to the story.
Of some of the comments that I have received, I was urged to make the stories longer. I have attempted to do this. One reader suggested that I focus more on how and what my character was feeling during her introduction to BDSM. I have tried to incoroprate this into my writing. I hope that I have been able to add these elements.
If you have not yet had an opportunity to read these stories, please do so. I would love to hear any constructive criticism that you may have. Please tell me what I can do to evolve more as a writer.
My Stories:
Anything for a promotion BDSM By: Sexdiamond 10-30-06
Anything for a promotion Ch. 02 BDSM 11-06-06
Anything for a promotion Ch. 03 BDSM (Should post soon, I hope)
Thanks for your interest, and feedback.
I would like to thank everyone for their comments on my stories. I greatly appreciate all of the feedback, as these stories are my first attempts at erotic writings. I have submitted Ch.03 and it is currently awaiting approval. I hope that everyone will find it to be a grand conclusion to the story.
Of some of the comments that I have received, I was urged to make the stories longer. I have attempted to do this. One reader suggested that I focus more on how and what my character was feeling during her introduction to BDSM. I have tried to incoroprate this into my writing. I hope that I have been able to add these elements.
If you have not yet had an opportunity to read these stories, please do so. I would love to hear any constructive criticism that you may have. Please tell me what I can do to evolve more as a writer.
My Stories:
Anything for a promotion BDSM By: Sexdiamond 10-30-06
Anything for a promotion Ch. 02 BDSM 11-06-06
Anything for a promotion Ch. 03 BDSM (Should post soon, I hope)
Thanks for your interest, and feedback.
