stories and technique

[alleycatsr07]

It has been a long time since I turned away from my passion with writing. I am figuring to try again and I figure this sight would help unleash my creativity and love for writing again.

I had started on a story last night and was even almost through without when my computer gave out. Basically I lost my story.
I am thinking about rewriting it but first i want to know if the idea would be worth even reading about.

The story is about Jada Hughes a sexually frustrated woman who is tired of now having a guy to fulfill her desires. The male is named Andrais and he is a genie trapped inside a painting a boy is her horny.

The twist is for once the genie doesnt have to fulfill his masters wishes; instead his own wishes get fulfilled.


Some great advice on writing this kind of fiction would be great. any help is much appreciated.

 

[Stella_Omega]

welcome to AH!

I do think the story is worth writing. I can think of several ways to approach this story, depending on what you want to talk about. Your plot is nice and simple, and a great place for your comeback fic

What kind of advice are you looking for though? Fantasy fiction is great fun to write and read, but the storytelling guidelines are still about the same. If you want just to write the sex-- a stroker-- go for it. Please don't tell us that she is a 34 DD and he has a ten-inch dick, please don't make your characters scream; "I'M CUUUUUMMMMIIINNNGGG!!! and please remember the lube.

If you want to get more involved than that, it's good to figure out why your characters are doing what they are doing, and how they feel about it...

 

[bronzeage]

It has been a long time since I turned away from my passion with writing. I am figuring to try again and I figure this sight would help unleash my creativity and love for writing again.

I had started on a story last night and was even almost through without when my computer gave out. Basically I lost my story.
I am thinking about rewriting it but first i want to know if the idea would be worth even reading about.

The story is about Jada Hughes a sexually frustrated woman who is tired of now having a guy to fulfill her desires. The male is named Andrais and he is a genie trapped inside a painting a boy is her horny.

The twist is for once the genie doesnt have to fulfill his masters wishes; instead his own wishes get fulfilled.


Some great advice on writing this kind of fiction would be great. any help is much appreciated.

Any story is worth reading if it is well written. I strongly suggest a patient editor if your post is a fair sample of your writing.

 

[Carnevil9]

I agree with bronzeage: writing well is a habbit, and the more you exercise that habbit, the more natural it becomes. Yes, I know; many folks will moan, "Hey, it's only a post; I use better technique when I write actual prose!" But I don't buy it. When I read a post so full of errors, I have no interest in reading any of that person's submissions. It is bad advertising.

It's like going to a doctor who smokes and slouches: I just wouldn't do it.......Carney

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Oh! I think most writing is crap and getting published has nuthin to do with talent. The older I get the more I'm convinced its true. Most publishers play follow the leader, as do most editors. And readers buy whatever bilge they see advertised on tv.

 

[CharleyH]

I agree with bronzeage: writing well is a habbit, and the more you exercise that habbit, the more natural it becomes. Yes, I know; many folks will moan, "Hey, it's only a post; I use better technique when I write actual prose!" But I don't buy it. When I read a post so full of errors, I have no interest in reading any of that person's submissions. It is bad advertising.

It's like going to a doctor who smokes and slouches: I just wouldn't do it.......Carney

What's a "habbit"?
(And ........? )

 

[Carnevil9]

What's a "habbit"?
(And ........? )

It's my homage to JRR Tolkien. That, and a new browser with as-yet-nonfunctional spell check. Grrrr......Carney