Stopping Time

[The_Rabbi]

I've always had a fantasy (erotic and non-erotic) about the ability to freeze time for everybody except myself. Does anyone know of a story along those lines?

 

[wicker]

I've always had a fantasy (erotic and non-erotic) about the ability to freeze time for everybody except myself. Does anyone know of a story along those lines?

here's some chyoo stories YOU can add to:
http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/307
http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/1088
http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/2500
http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/5743
http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/6058

and some here read only:
http://www.asstr.org/~timestop/IronNick/IronNick.html : Time Enough for Fun, Back To School, Best Time of the Day, Chronos Man, Timestop in the Park, and Heather's Really Bad Day

 

[Fantasies_only]

I've always had a fantasy (erotic and non-erotic) about the ability to freeze time for everybody except myself. Does anyone know of a story along those lines?

We were just talking about another one called Clock Stoppers.
It's a time stopping story (which I would call sci-fi/fantasy), but it might have been put in the mind control category.

 

[The_Rabbi]

Thanks, very much.

 

[dozenjinx]

I've always had a fantasy (erotic and non-erotic) about the ability to freeze time for everybody except myself. Does anyone know of a story along those lines?

Nicholson Baker's The Fermata. Fun book.

 

[MsLinnet]

There was a story line in one of the star trek movies, Insurrection I think that explored this. Worth a look and see if it could be expanded.

 

[The_Rabbi]

There was a story line in one of the star trek movies, Insurrection I think that explored this. Worth a look and see if it could be expanded.

Nicholson Baker's The Fermata. Fun book.

dozenjinx -I just picked it up at the Library, Thanks.
Linnet- I'll do some research thanks.

 

[The_Rabbi]

I just finished reading the Fermata and I found it pretty silly and very immature. Although I think Philip Roth could write the same story and it would be great.
I've also read most of the stories I could find on the subject and I'm universally disappointed.
All of the stories seem to be about a guy who has the power to freeze time and they use it to either undress or or having sex with unknowing, unmoving women. I'm not opposed to an occasional non-consent story but having sex with a unmoving body seems pretty unexciting.
I think the power to stop time has so many possibilities (erotic and otherwise). I think I'll have to try write one myself. I've never written a story before ( I should say I've never finished a story) but I think it's time.

 

[wicker]

I just finished reading the Fermata and I found it pretty silly and very immature. Although I think Philip Roth could write the same story and it would be great.
I've also read most of the stories I could find on the subject and I'm universally disappointed.
All of the stories seem to be about a guy who has the power to freeze time and they use it to either undress or or having sex with unknowing, unmoving women. I'm not opposed to an occasional non-consent story but having sex with a unmoving body seems pretty unexciting.
I think the power to stop time has so many possibilities (erotic and otherwise). I think I'll have to try write one myself. I've never written a story before ( I should say I've never finished a story) but I think it's time.

The Fermata was very disappointing. Little to no humor and little erotica.

What did you think of the Iron Nick stories and the time stop stories on chyoo? We need more time stop authors on chyoo!

 

[rosco rathbone]

Nicholson Baker's The Fermata. Fun book.

About the best erotic lit every written.

 

[Blogrotica]

It's been done, and there are some great stories along this line.

 

[AmyGirl20]

How about a time-stop story from a girl's point of view? She's a hot cheerleader type and doesn't know that her geeky neighbour has fantasies about her or that he can stop time. She might be sunbathing in the garden and suddenly her bikini disappears. Or she might be in the supermarket and suddenly be bent over the counter with a cucumber up her ass. Might be a bit weird but it's different at least.

 

[wicker]

How about a time-stop story from a girl's point of view? She's a hot cheerleader type and doesn't know that her geeky neighbour has fantasies about her or that he can stop time. She might be sunbathing in the garden and suddenly her bikini disappears. Or she might be in the supermarket and suddenly be bent over the counter with a cucumber up her ass. Might be a bit weird but it's different at least.

that's a hot idea!

 

[wicker]

How about a time-stop story from a girl's point of view? She's a hot cheerleader type and doesn't know that her geeky neighbour has fantasies about her or that he can stop time. She might be sunbathing in the garden and suddenly her bikini disappears. Or she might be in the supermarket and suddenly be bent over the counter with a cucumber up her ass. Might be a bit weird but it's different at least.

here's a PG version of that concept: http://www.asstr.org/~timestop/IronNick/ironnick17.html

 

[AmyGirl20]

here's a PG version of that concept: http://www.asstr.org/~timestop/IronNick/ironnick17.html

It's ok but way too nice. Not a cucumber in sight.

 

[The_Rabbi]

here's a PG version of that concept: http://www.asstr.org/~timestop/IronNick/ironnick17.html

That is pretty amazing. It's like a bad version of what Amy is looking for. I'm going to need to spend some time on that site. It's a hold writer's site devoted to Stopping Time. Guess I'm not the only one with that fantasy.

And I still think it can be done with a little more maturity and still be really hot.

Did you ever think of how many orgasms you could have if your partner was suspending time in between?

 

[Black_Dahlia]

I'm sure there's a similar story on this site, but it's mind control, not time-stop. A girl finds herself somehow naked or in a compromising position, but doesn't know how it happened. It turns out she's hypnotised or something, and doesn't remember undressing herself, or anything else that may have happened to her in her hypnotic state. In her mind, she was dressed one minute and naked the next. It's told from her POV, so it's a bit weird at first, until the reader's told what is actually happening to her.

 

[wicker]

these stories have women finding things up their butts:
http://www.asstr.org/~timestop/IronNick/ironnick23.html
http://www.asstr.org/~timestop/IronNick/ironnick11.html

if you join chyoo.com, you can add to this time stop story where pretty much anything but incest goes: http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/307

This one is mind control, but the opening thread leaves open the possibilty for time stop:
http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.summary/6058

I edit both those chyoo stories, and as you can tell, I'm a time stop fan.

 

[MultipleOrgasmDonor]

I've always had a fantasy (erotic and non-erotic) about the ability to freeze time for everybody except myself. Does anyone know of a story along those lines?

havnt come across a story on lit like that.. but if you check out the movie "cashback"... its somewhat on the same lines.. a beautiful movie.. and they ve used the concept in an extremely artistic way..

maybe someone can come up with a story drawing inspiration from it...

 

[GratefulFred]

I haven't stopped time in my stories but I did do one with a bit of time travel. Naturally something warped...

Not to be read on Shabbat Rabbi...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=374856

 

[Fantasies_only]

I'm sure there's a similar story on this site, but it's mind control, not time-stop. A girl finds herself somehow naked or in a compromising position, but doesn't know how it happened. It turns out she's hypnotised or something, and doesn't remember undressing herself, or anything else that may have happened to her in her hypnotic state. In her mind, she was dressed one minute and naked the next. It's told from her POV, so it's a bit weird at first, until the reader's told what is actually happening to her.

I'd love to read something like that.
Please give me the link.

Here's another time stopping story.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=339008

 

[RicoLouis]

Always wondered if a guy cums and time is stopped does his load freeze in mid air? Just a thought.

Personally I would love to read something where time is slowed down. Sort of bullet time sex.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=50YhnMM_oXo

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cjPfHhn9Fiw&feature=related

 

[The_Rabbi]

I haven't stopped time in my stories but I did do one with a bit of time travel. Naturally something warped...

Not to be read on Shabbat Rabbi...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=374856

Shabbat's over Fred. Gonna read it now. I'll let you know what I think.