geronimo_appleby
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it's an improvement - dammit - but one of my lit pieces has been stolen and ... re-worked. i kinda prefer the babelfish version.
http://dreambabesnakedboobs.sexusbl...bymarion-had-fondnessd-the-thursday-brunette/
a snippet would be:
The decisive criticism left Marion bemtatty and she stared into vacant sgait for some bolsters after lynching up the ring. ‘A skirt?’ She howevert, puzzled by Astrid’s ending line. ‘Why a skirt?’
which was originally:
The final comment left Marion bemused and she stared into empty space for several seconds after hanging up the phone. 'A skirt?' She thought, puzzled by Astrid's closing line. 'Why a skirt?'
... that lynching up the ring has got to smart a tad, eh?
http://dreambabesnakedboobs.sexusbl...bymarion-had-fondnessd-the-thursday-brunette/
a snippet would be:
The decisive criticism left Marion bemtatty and she stared into vacant sgait for some bolsters after lynching up the ring. ‘A skirt?’ She howevert, puzzled by Astrid’s ending line. ‘Why a skirt?’
which was originally:
The final comment left Marion bemused and she stared into empty space for several seconds after hanging up the phone. 'A skirt?' She thought, puzzled by Astrid's closing line. 'Why a skirt?'
... that lynching up the ring has got to smart a tad, eh?
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