I thought the 3rd time, I have found an editor, but he don't find the time.
He wrote:
"I've taken a look at your story and from what I can see this will take a really long time to edit. There are a lot of small things that need to be corrected and right now I don't have the time to spend on such a huge task. Stopping every sentence to make a correction would take hours, and i just don't have that time."
So I have to refresh my demand from end of Juni again:
Category: Non Consent/Reluctance
Tags: domination, femdom, tease, seduction, control, temptation, orgasm control, humiliation, denial, CFNM
Karen 07: She don't accept the dress code
Even the principal is no match for her skills.
Looking for an editor: femdom, non consent / reluctant
I've finished the next story of the series "Karen". It is similar stuff as the other stories. If you like the first ones, I'm think, that you like this one too.
I'm not an English native, so I'm very unsure with many things: grammar, spell, using the words in a right way. I'm also interested in criticism of the plot and the pace and so on.
This time I struggled a lot finding the right words. I think, it is perhaps, that I wrote about a lot of clothing, that are often very special words, I'm not sure about.
I would like an editor, who like this kind of stories.
The story has 8872 words, 48480 characters. I suppose, that it will be 3 pages on Literotica.Thanks a lot!
LrseFauc
He wrote:
"I've taken a look at your story and from what I can see this will take a really long time to edit. There are a lot of small things that need to be corrected and right now I don't have the time to spend on such a huge task. Stopping every sentence to make a correction would take hours, and i just don't have that time."
So I have to refresh my demand from end of Juni again:
Category: Non Consent/Reluctance
Tags: domination, femdom, tease, seduction, control, temptation, orgasm control, humiliation, denial, CFNM
Karen 07: She don't accept the dress code
Even the principal is no match for her skills.
Looking for an editor: femdom, non consent / reluctant
I've finished the next story of the series "Karen". It is similar stuff as the other stories. If you like the first ones, I'm think, that you like this one too.
I'm not an English native, so I'm very unsure with many things: grammar, spell, using the words in a right way. I'm also interested in criticism of the plot and the pace and so on.
This time I struggled a lot finding the right words. I think, it is perhaps, that I wrote about a lot of clothing, that are often very special words, I'm not sure about.
I would like an editor, who like this kind of stories.
The story has 8872 words, 48480 characters. I suppose, that it will be 3 pages on Literotica.Thanks a lot!
LrseFauc
