Steamy Interlude

[christcat69]

Steamy Interlude

Warm water cascading over our bare skin,
Your silky flesh rubbing against mine,
A thin stream, like a waterfall, pouring from your supple nipples…
I catch it between my thirsty lips.

As you gently lather my skin, I gasp,
Overwhelmed by the sweet fragrance of pomegranate and this lucid vision of you,
My body shudders and my mind reels…
As I envision the exquisite things I will do to you.


I finished it. What do you think?

Fun with water

 

[_Land]

I love the finished poem, thanks for finishing it

 

[christcat69]

Thank you

I'm glad you liked it. I'm haven't been very motivated lately so that means alot. I'm not sure if I want to submit it or not. I'm not sure if I can republish it in my "work in progress" if it's on lit. Do you know? I was reading somewhere that most publishers won't take a piece already published elsewhere.

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