Star Wars: Attack of the Clones

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The reason this is in the sexual area of the literotica forum is because it will contain sexual posts so...

Right this thread will start off at the begining of this move or at a certain point in the movie the person who plays anakin gets to choose where it starts off i would prefer it to be before Padme (me) tells Anakin that she loves him the script will not have to be word for word and we can have scenes taht are not in the movie and we can also changes scenes as well ok here is the character list:

Anakin
Padme (taken)
Count Dooku
Master Yoda
Obi-wan
Jar Jar
Droids
Clones
Jango Fett
Mace Windu

You can also create your own character but they have to be in the battle on the planet where Obi-wan and Anakin fight Count Dooku you can be evil or good or in between (rogue)

Right so the person who is Anakin will start the posting off.

Oh and also when the end of this movie occurs in thsi tread we move onto the Clone wars and when that is finished we will continue onto revenge of the sith if anyone wishes it.
mainly dedicated posters and i don't mind about posting speed.
 
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hello i may be interested in playing count Dooku, master Yoda, or Mace Windu.
 
Yes you can play as Anakin

Which means that you decided where we are starting in the story but it would be good if it was at the beginning.

I await your post.

Kisses
 
Anakin and Obi Wan both walked into the turbolift, directing it up to the floor where Senator Amidala had always stayed.

"You seem a little on-edge." Obi Wan commented, as the lift sped on up.

Anakin continued to straighten his cloak, and then turned his head to face his Master. "Not at all."

"I havent felt you this tense since, since we fell into that nest of gundarks."

"You fell into the nightmare Master, and I rescued you, remember?" Anakin pointed out, and turned his head to face the doorway.

"Oh... yes." Obi Wan replied, allowing himself a slight chuckle, which Anakin noticed. As he sees this, he shook his head and smiled at his Master's immaturity.

"You're sweating, relax. Take a deep breathe." Obi Wan said calmly, leaning over to inform his Padawan.

Anakin turned to Obi Wan, slightly nervous. "I havent seen her in ten years Master."

After a few more moments of silence, the doors of the lift slowly and silently slid open, and both Anakin and Obi Wan step out, only to be met by Jar Jar Binks.

"OBI? ANI! Its a pleasant to be aseesing yous again!" Jar Jar exclaims, taking both their hands and shaking them rather excitedly. Immediatly after, Jar Jar leads both Anakin and Obi Wan into the main gathering and living area of the Senators suite, where the Senator, and one of her officers are looking out of the window.

"Senator Padme! Deesa palloes here." Jar Jar said, waving his hand at the two Jedi standing behind him. "Lookie lookie Senator, deesa Jedi arriving."

The Senator smiled, and Jar Jar then moved off to the side. As Jar Jar moves away, Obi Wan moved forward, and bowed to the Senator as she approached.

"It is a pleasure to see you again my lady." Obi Wan greeted Padme, as Anakin moved off to one side.
 
I was wondering-Since I like to be completely orginal and everything- was wondering if I could make my own character.I want him to be a jedi knight and I want him to be Cin Drallig's top apprentice and heir apparent.

For those of you who do not know who Cin Drallig is,hes the legendary lightsaber master.He teaches Jedi of all levels how to fight.When padawans first come to the temple,they learn to fight from him.Then when Jedi knights wish to learn one of the seven light saber styles,they all come to him.I want my character to be his best apprentice and just recently made a true jedi knight from passing the trails.

If not,I guess I have to play Mace?
 
Great way to copy the script word for word man.It must have taken you forever.~Sighs and shakes his head~
 
(OOC: At that point I was really bored, so found a copy on the internet, lol. shake your head all you want, not bothered myself.)
 
(OOC: I am not actually that much bothered about that single post i am not mad or angry at anyone becasu ei am sooooo sweet :D

Also yes you can be who you want to be (but could you possibly play Mace ASWELL if noone els wants to play him for the battle also all of the charcters will be on that planet helping the clonetroopers is that ok) and actually to start the Thread off with some of the script its not really that bad because it is the beginning of the thread but don't do it too much please you can refer to the script for sentence from the movie but lines can be added and also the thoughts and feelings of the people in the scene e.g in the lift you could have put how anticipated anakin was to see Padme but how worried he was at the same time.

Also you two seem to getting into an argument kind off i am a sweet person all round except when my boyfriend cheats on me and if he does he is DEAD :devil:

So i would be grateful if you shake hands and leave it at that.

kisses)

::Just before::

Two yellow Naboo Fighters fly towards the planet coruscant, followed by a large Naboo Cruiser Padme looked down at the Large Planet which was covered with Buildings it was not like her home planet of Naboo where nature was popular, where you could stand somewhere and not have Soldiers, Jedi, Droids running about suddenly her Comm burst into life "Senator, we're making our final approach in to Coruscant" The message was being sent to the Naboo cruiser and her ship as to make sure that she could hear the message and not arouse suspicion if someone was listening.

Her Decoys voice said "Very Good Lieutenant" The three ships land on a Palace Landing platform, Padme opens the cockpit roof and hops out of the ship stepping down the stairs she walks over to the Captain who says "We made it I guess I was wrong there was no danger at all." As the decoy Amidala reached the bottom of the Ramp the Naboo cruiser exploded knocking Padme and Captain Typho to the ground as are the people surrounding her decoy and the decoy herself.

Captain Typho and padme stood up and ran over to the bodys on the ground which is covered in dry blood as she bends down to look at the decoy removing her helmet at the same time her droid R2-D2 dropped out of her naboo ship and rolle dover to her.

The decoy awakens and looks into Padmes eyes and says "I'm sorry M'Lady. I've failed you, Senator." Padme hugs her Decoy as she dies so many of her personal friends lives had been lost trying to protect her now she was being pressured by the queen and her close friend the chancollor to get protection of a jedi

"We must move m'Lady it is still dangerous here" he said trying to move her but to no avail "It was a mistake to come back" she said tears rolling don her cheeks Captain Typho turns and says "Corde did her duty M'Lady you did yours now please can we move on" PAdme reluctactly turns away and heads into the building R2-D2 following behind bleeping as usual.

Padme was now standing in her room lookin gou of the window at the speeders flying past after the incdent at the platform she had had to go to the sneate chamber who believed that the assasination had been a succes when se arrived the were all quite glad but she had seen the trade federations representatives who was a droid grimace and ress some buttons obviously sending a message.

After that she had had to go to Palpatines Chamber where she wa sonce again pressured into having protection around her she personally did not consider her lifeto be so valuable she hated the fact that people were dying trying to protect her she was going to doanything she could too stop the war from beginning.

It had been sugested to her by palpatine that Obi-Wan Kenobi be the jedi that protects her she had considered this she held Obi-wan in high esteem he was after all the one that had detroyed the sith that threatned her planet of course yet again someone had died Qui-gon had been instructive and had not listened to her but she was still saddened by his death.

Then she had remembered Anakin, Anakin was his apprentice at that point she downright refused the protection she didn't want Anakin to get hurt she wouldn;t be able to cope with herself if he died protecting her she ahd feelings for him Then Master Yoda himself had told her it would be wise to accept their protection and about how little she worried about herself she had accepted it then that she was yet again going to put peoples lives in danger.

Suddenly she heard Jar Jar shouting it was ahrd to understand him when he talked near impossible to understand him when he was excited it was then hewent quiet and poked his head threw the door and said "Mesa here again Looky looky Senator Desa Jedi arriven.

She turns to the door and walks so she is in front of the sofa as Obi-Wan and Anakin enter,she gives him a quick glance then takes Obi-Wan hands in hers as he says "It's a pleasure to see you again M'Lady" she responded with "It has been far too long Master Kenobi, I'm so glad our paths have crossed again but I must warn you that I think your presence here is unnecessary and that i totally object to this."

She moved over so she was in front of Anakin and said "Annie? My goodness is that you, my you've grown." stareing into his eyes.

(sorry about how long that is they won't all be as long as that.)
 
(hello could i play Mace Windu or Master Yoda i wil play both but if they guy earler wants to play his character and mace windus then i will just play Master Yoda.)
 
(could i play a female jedi She will be involved on the battle where the Yoda v Dooku fight happens so are we waiting for the people playing anakin and Obi-Wan Kenobi to post before we start or...)
 
Yes you can both join i don't really know if donald and thescarlet are going to be posting anymore if you could PM me as soon as possible it would help.
 
OOC: Who says I aint postin? :p I is bak neow, yeehar. Woaw, too far I am taking this. EEp. Busy weekend, soz, shouldnt happen too often.

IC:

As Padme noticed him, Anakin's heart felt strange, it felt as though someone had reached inside and was clenching their fist around the organ. He looked into her eyes, remebering how beautiful she had been all those years ago.

"As have you, grown more beautiful I mean, for a Senator I mean." Anakin replied, noticing deep down he had made a fool of himself.

As Obi Wan and the rest of the group moved to sit on the sofas, Anakin's eyes never left the sleek form of Padme as she sat on the couch opposite Obi Wan, and Anakin took his place at his Masters side on the couch as well.
 
(il play Obi-Wan if that ok if not just post and i will delete this post)

Obi-wan shook his head disaprovingly as Anakin said "As have you, grown more beautiful I mean, for a Senator I mean."

But he did smile when Anakin got embarrased as Padme said "Oh Annie, you'll always be that little boy I knew on Tatooine."

As they moved to sit he gave anakin the Watch what you say she is a Senator now look, He sat down opposite the senator and said "Our presence will be invisible M'Lady I can assure you." The man who had been standing at the other end of the room moved to stand behind Padme and said "I'm very grateful you're here Master Kenobi I'm Captain Typho, head of Her Majesty's security service. Queen Jamillia has informed you of your assignment. The situation is more dangerous than the Senator will admit."

He frowned as padme said "I don't need more security, I need answers. I want to know who is trying to kill me."
he replyed with "I am sorry Senator We're here to protect you, not to start an investigation."
 
She laughed and shook her head as Anakin said ""As have you grown more beautiful I mean for a Senator I mean." She thought about it for a second it was good to be able to talk to Anakin again, she responded with ""Oh Annie you'll always be that little boy I knew on Tatooine." and smiled then moved to sit on the couch facing Obi-wan and Anakin after Obi-wan Kenobi had finished.

"I don't need more security, I need answers. I want to know who is trying to kill me." so he can stop killing my friends she thought to herself.
 
Anakin sat next to his Master, looking up at the beautiful form of Senator Amidala.

"We will find out whos trying to kill you Padme." Anakin said, and turned his head to Obi Wan as he cut in with usual lecture about Anakin taking things above the mandate.

Anakin merely protested that it was in the interest of protecting Padme that they'd find out who it was. But most of what Obi Wan actually said, he let fly over his head. Obi Wan kept him back too much. Anakin knew he was alot stronger than his Master would allow him to be, he was just never given the oppurtunity.
 
Obi-Wan bit his lip in frustation at Anakin and gave him the please be QUIET! look but yet again Anakin didn't seem to get the message so he verbalised it he turned to Anakin and said "We will not exceed the Mandate my young padawan learner and you will pay attention to my lead he tured his head back to the Senator and was about to speak before Anakin said

"Why!"

He snapped his head back to Anakin "What!!" he listened to Anakins response he himself would not be as rude to interupt him "We will do what the Jedi Council has instructed us to do and you will learn your place my padawan" he heard Padme start to speak and turned to her.
 
Padme sat there slightly smiling as Obi-Wan Kenobi and Anakin had their little fight she didn't want Anakin to get hurt but she still wanted this masked person to be found so she could stop worrying about her protectors dying because someone was trying to kill her.

She waited until they seemed to have finished, stood up and said "I hope that perhaps with merely your presence, the mysteries surrounding this threat will be revealed. Now, if you will excuse me I will retire to my bedroom. " she turned and walked out of the room the doorclsed behind her, she stopped sighed then moved on again.

in the room..

Captain Typho moved towards the door aswell then turned to the jedi "Well, I know I feel a lot better having you here Master Kenobi and I'll have an officer situated on every floor and I'll be at the control center downstairs at all times incase you need to contact me." he then leaves the room heading for the lift.

Jar JAr moved upto Anakin and said "Mesa busten wit happiness seein yousa again Annie Deesa veeery bad times, bombad times and messsssstreeess Amiiidaala is busten wit happiness seein yousa too annir shesa happy, Happier then meesa ever seein hr ina longo time."
 
"She hardly even recognised me Jar Jar." Anakin replied, and turned to look up at the clumsy gun-gun.(?spelling?). "I've thought about every day since we parted... and she hardly even recognised me." Anakin continued, and turned to see Obi Wan approaching him from the window.

Jar Jar, at this point, wandered away and Obi Wan began to use the famous words he would never let Anakin forget. Be mindful of your thoughts. Anakin knew this. He would never forget those words. It seemed as though Obi Wan were trying to drill them into his mind, making it so that they were the only words Anakin was able to say. Be mindful of your thoughts, be mindful of your thoughts. Urgh. He'd be more mindful if Obi Wan would lay off him. Obi Wan never let that matter drop. Anakin was more mindful than Obi Wan would ever be. He was just never given the chance to prove it.
 
Obi-wan stood up and bowed as Padme left the room then went over to the windows to look out at coruscant he could hear Jar jar and Anakin talking in the background he turned to them when jar jar has finished and shook his head as he approached Anakin

"Anakin, you're focusing on the negative be mindful of your thoughts she was glad to see us. Now lets check the security i will go downstairs and see if Captains Typhos Men are ready you stay here and cover this area if there is any sign of a assassin nearing the premises contact me and i will be up right away just make sure noone reaches that room"

Obi-wan turned and left the room and got in the elevator and headed downstairs he knew he was being hard on Anakin but sometimes he thought that Anakin just ignored everything he said anyway the Jedi Council themselves had told him that he must enforce the order onto Anakin they did not argree with him training him but they were doing their best as was he to train Anakin to become a jedi.

(Oh and i blieve it is Gun-Gan or Gan-Gun i can't remember)
 
padme entered her room Artoo following behind she sat on the bed as Artoo moved in front of her and beeped she looked down and said
"you know what to do don't you Artoo remember if you see something, anything don't hesitate to call Master Kenobi down here oh and remember to turn off all the cameras except the one pointing at you ok" The droid beeped adn then turned and put itself in te corner a flap opened and grabber came out and opened a hatch in the wall , Artoo beeped again and another device popped out and sloted into a node in the hatch which turned.

The three cameras pointing to the bed switched off leaving the camera pointing to Artoo on.

She waited until Artoo turned off and slipped into her nightgown and got into bed falling into a deep sleep.
 
Anakin placed the camera viewer down. Padme had turned out all the cameras leaving the only camera trained on Artoo. Not exactly something someone wants to watch.

He walked back into the main living area and up to the balcony, the pane of glass used for a doorway slid up, and Anakin walked outside, and began peering over the edge at the city below.

He could sense Padme in the room next to the balcony. She slept. Her neat figure lying in the bed. Her sleek and slender form covered by merely a single sheet.
 
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