lonely_hubby60
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… or trying to learn from better ad writers than myself.
I ran into an amazingly simple ad today, and it seems I ought to change my writing style. So here's my description of you first (BTW, hard to not copy the other ad verbatim):
A deep curiosity within you is paramount for me. A woman not used to asking questions is not one I can establish a lasting connection with. Desiring deep connections over shallowness is important for me in a woman, and most of all, you should crave connecting with a man like me. One reason for that: you need to share the sexuality inside of you with a true friend. As well as sharing a lot else, which all become clearer to you as you discuss them with a friend and confidant.
Most important about me: I aim to be that man and become your true friend. One you simply feel comfortable with, and one you'll enjoy sharing with, what's on your mind. I desire – as you do also – to enrich each other's lives thru written words. Read my signature post, when you like to know more about how I tick.
Amazing how short an ad can become, when one focuses on only important matters.
I ran into an amazingly simple ad today, and it seems I ought to change my writing style. So here's my description of you first (BTW, hard to not copy the other ad verbatim):
A deep curiosity within you is paramount for me. A woman not used to asking questions is not one I can establish a lasting connection with. Desiring deep connections over shallowness is important for me in a woman, and most of all, you should crave connecting with a man like me. One reason for that: you need to share the sexuality inside of you with a true friend. As well as sharing a lot else, which all become clearer to you as you discuss them with a friend and confidant.
Most important about me: I aim to be that man and become your true friend. One you simply feel comfortable with, and one you'll enjoy sharing with, what's on your mind. I desire – as you do also – to enrich each other's lives thru written words. Read my signature post, when you like to know more about how I tick.
Amazing how short an ad can become, when one focuses on only important matters.
