Spot the difference

[Gaia_Lorraine]

Look out oe’r the white onyx snow
Look out oe’r the vista below
Who guard oe’r my poetic snow

Same beat, same rythm. Where lies the problem?

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=282525
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=283318

 

[Sienna]

...hacking my way through the LITEROTICA JUNGLE...

Hi my love

(((((((((((( LORRAINE ))))))))))))

 

[TheRainMan]

Look out oe’r the white onyx snow
Look out oe’r the vista below
Who guard oe’r my poetic snow

Same beat, same rythm. Where lies the problem?

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=282525
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=283318

huh???

sorry. i don't get the question.

(and you spelled rhythm wrong).

 

[My Erotic Trail]

Look out oe’r the white onyx snow
Look out oe’r the vista below
Who guard oe’r my poetic snow

Same beat, same rythm. Where lies the problem?

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=282525
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=283318

inspirational...
in reguards to contemplating writing a poem where the 'BOLD' letters makes an alternate note <grin. This is the second poem in two days that I read where letters randomly stand out such as 'poetic snail' (~_~) I believe the other poem will be surfacing soon.

 

[Gaia_Lorraine]

...hacking my way through the LITEROTICA JUNGLE...

Hi my love

(((((((((((( LORRAINE ))))))))))))

Whoops ! I hadn't realised I had started a new thread, I thought I was posting in MyNecroticSnail's thread. Silly me

But while I appear to be here ... (((Hugggsss))) Sienna ILY2 xx

 

[Gaia_Lorraine]

huh???

sorry. i don't get the question.

(and you spelled rhythm wrong).

Did I? Checks the dictionary...
Mmm, perhaps the dictionary has got it wrong?

 

[MyNecroticSnail]

Post the poem, with the comments in full. In the thread any thread.

 

[Sienna]

Now go here ...

https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=474190

 

[Gaia_Lorraine]

inspirational...
in reguards to contemplating writing a poem where the 'BOLD' letters makes an alternate note <grin. This is the second poem in two days that I read where letters randomly stand out such as 'poetic snail' (~_~) I believe the other poem will be surfacing soon.

You said you gave Poetic Snail 100% when it really deserves a 75%?
In all honesty it doesn't even deserve that
It was never really intended to be a poem per se, more of a demonstration to show how Little Greek houses flows.
I would have much preferred if you had given that a 100 instead

 

[Gaia_Lorraine]

By the way Sienna... I Love the Sprogometer

 

[Sienna]

Thankyou

 

[MyNecroticSnail]

You said you gave Poetic Snail 100% when it really deserves a 75%?
In all honesty it doesn't even deserve that
It was never really intended to be a poem per se, more of a demonstration to show how Little Greek houses flows.
I would have much preferred if you had given that a 100 instead

Post them both

 

[MyNecroticSnail]

You said you gave Poetic Snail 100% when it really deserves a 75%?
In all honesty it doesn't even deserve that
It was never really intended to be a poem per se, more of a demonstration to show how Little Greek houses flows.
I would have much preferred if you had given that a 100 instead

Really, it did make a new poems review. Tell-tale-trail found it inspirational , and I found it amusing.

 

[MyNecroticSnail]

inspirational...
in reguards to contemplating writing a poem where the 'BOLD' letters makes an alternate note <grin. This is the second poem in two days that I read where letters randomly stand out such as 'poetic snail' (~_~) I believe the other poem will be surfacing soon.

nothing inspires me more than the sight of some cowboy coming out guns blazing behind a couple of skirts

 

[Gaia_Lorraine]

nothing inspires me more than the sight of some cowboy coming out guns blazing behind a couple of skirts

You are very egotistical aren't MNS?
You accuse me of sarcasm yet you practice the very same

 

[My Erotic Trail]

nothing inspires me more than the sight of some cowboy coming out guns blazing behind a couple of skirts

neither my pistol nor my gun <grin (~_~) ... shear poetry!