Spectacurly Unhelpful Feedback

[sweetnpetite]

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This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

it was pathetic story i have ever read on this web site pls do rite
some thing good ...


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[sweetnpetite]

This lovely (and unhelpful) feedback gave me quite a chuckle, so I figured I'd share it with you all.

It could be just the laugh that makes you decide to keep living for one more day.

Ya never know!

 

[Dar~]

yes sweet it pathetic you should do rite more better sum time on the future

 

[DarkDuchess]

Rilly. U shud. What am I sposed to du without pitures?


Seriously, I detest that kind of feedback. If someone thinks my story sucks balls, okay, but tell me why.

 

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[BlackShanglan]

I knew it was coming sooner or later, but I'm still amused - a request for "more sex" in "Will."

 

[R. Richard]

This message contains feedback for: Amy Sweet
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

it was pathetic story i have ever read on this web site pls do rite
some thing good ...


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The meaning of the feedback is obvious. The reader is offended by the unusual grammar and usage in your story. Said grammar and usage is nothing like what Anonymous uses.

We need to do some serious culling here to upgrade the genetic pool!

 

[rgraham666]

The meaning of the feedback is obvious. The reader is offended by the unusual grammar and usage in your story. Said grammar and usage is nothing like what Anonymous uses.

We need to do some serious culling here to upgrade the genetic pool!

And we're fresh out of chlorine!

 

[BlackShanglan]

The meaning of the feedback is obvious. The reader is offended by the unusual grammar and usage in your story. Said grammar and usage is nothing like what Anonymous uses.

Dear, Mr richard, you're storys good, but, trie to rite with more, commas.

thnk, ytou.

 

[minsue]

I knew it was coming sooner or later, but I'm still amused - a request for "more sex" in "Will."

Anon or signed?

 

[BlackShanglan]

Anon or signed?

Signed, actually ... to be fair, some quite interesting emails followed.

 

[minsue]

... to be fair, some quite interesting emails followed.

I would assume so!

 

[Samandiriel]

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This feedback was sent by: Anonymous



it was pathetic story i have ever read on this web site pls do rite
some thing good ...

I am job

 

[thebullet]

Favorite feedback --- People can be so articulate in their thoughtful critcism:

This is the worst bullshit story I have ever started on Literotica. I did not finish this piss-poor crap.

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This one made me all warm and fuzzy inside:

I am masturbating right now

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Sometimes you just have a fan:

When do i meet you??????
i'm ready and wet anytime
get ready to fuck my pussy and my ass

--thanks Mom
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I like an honest, straightforward appraisal of my work:

You are a god.

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Sometimes a literate response is the most moving:

That was a gay ass story....u suck as a writer! my cock didnt even get hard after reading it.! shame!

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It's the enthusiastic feedback the moves me the most:

This story wasnt to bad but i've read better

 

[CharleyH]

I knew it was coming sooner or later, but I'm still amused - a request for "more sex" in "Will."

EDIT: Sorry, for whatever reason I thought you said LESS sex. Still, framing and cherishing is always good!

 

[patricia51]

The comment that really staggered me was sent to one of my best friends here about one of her Lesbian stories...

"What would a woman know about eating pussy?"

 

[BlackShanglan]

EDIT: Sorry, for whatever reason I thought you said LESS sex./QUOTE]


No, that was the poor editors. How right they were ... how very right.

 

[BlackShanglan]

The comment that really staggered me was sent to one of my best friends here about one of her Lesbian stories...

"What would a woman know about eating pussy?"

Thank you for helping me start my day by laughing so hard I'm crying.

Shanglan

 

[mlady_france]

I still can't get over the guy who told me, "Your story was more effective than a kick in the balls. I totally lost my erection."

Wtf was he doing reading Humor and Satire for, then?

LMAO! That's great! Just what I needed this morning.

 

[oggbashan]

Most of my PCs are signed - thank you particularly to those of you from the AH - so I won't quote them.

These two are from anonymous:

Well, at least somebody actually had sex this time.

I appreciate the familiarity with my work that anon has.

Wheres the sex? Would have been better if it was even slightly erotic, the idea behind its good tho

That was on E-mail Valentine, my only E. The sex was hinted at and off-stage. Too subtle?

Og

 

[patricia51]

Most of my PCs are signed - thank you particularly to those of you from the AH - so I won't quote them.

These two are from anonymous:



I appreciate the familiarity with my work that anon has.



That was on E-mail Valentine, my only E. The sex was hinted at and off-stage. Too subtle?

Og

Og. "Subtle" is not a word this type of reader can spell much less comprehend.