Ive read some stories here on Literotica and i might have an outline for a new story
Ive always had vivid imagination but as for writing the skill is underdeveloped to say the least.
The theme is a "loving wives" category. How much would you spend to realize a fantasy?
Ill start with a short summery of the characters then a base for the plot line.
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Char
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Main protagonist is the Husband. He has fantasies about his wife. He likes hearing about past experience with old boyfriends and wishes she was/had done a lot more naughty stuff before she got married. The husband wont confront his wife directly with his fantasy. The voyeuristic tendencies in him make for a more subterfuge approach to the issue. Age 30-35
The Wife, is not a prude by any means just your regular loving wife with some modesty and shyness. But deep down harbors some regret of never relay having a wild phase. Sheltered background, married relatively young just a couple of boyfriends. And of course very hot and dormant sexy, age 28-30
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sub char
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The stud, featuring the standard issue six pack and beer can dick. well we might need to give the character some more depth. and history. Like a student gets contacted by the husband through the net.
The private investigator. very secretive behind the scenes char. Mission goes first. Never strays from the mission at hand.
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Plot
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This is a wife sharing story with a twist. Husband wants to see wife do some naughty stuff.
He creates a plan to make it happen.
First he is going to send his wife on a vacation "they won a trip for 2 weeks (cruise? tropical island? boating?) but he cant go etc.", she will be going "alone".
What she doesn't know is the husband has hired "the stud" and he will be going on the same trip. With a mission of course to seduce the wife and report back to the husband. He will be making daily reports of the progress and attaching photos taken with his cellphone camera as proof. Besides getting a free vacation the stud has a list containing various acts and situations the husband would like his wife to experience. For every act the stud gets points and will in the end get an extra cash bonus as well a tip.
Example, dancing sexy with the stud or with multiple guys. Going topless on the beach. Going braless and pantiless. Acting naughty and teasing. Exposing her self. Giving a blowjob, sex, anal swallowing. Sex with two guys. the list goes on...
What both the wife and stud doesn't know is the husband has also hired a PI that will be going on the trip. He will be recording the seduction from afar, with cameras, bugging, hidden webcam in the room. He thinks it a regular "i don't trust my wife going alone job".
I think this outline gives opportunity to a lot if interesting and sexually loaded situations. Described from various points of view. Alternating the story telling from the Husbands fantasy expectations jealousy, trying to get his wife to tell him about her trip and events. The wives perspective with a bundle of mixed feelings from reluctance, shyness, regret and guilt to new sexual highs, diving in to her hidden desires. Trying to down play events when talking to her husband or describing a situation. Admitting bits and pieces along the way but maybe not the whole truth.
The studs agenda to seduce the wife and the reports to the husband with pictures and exaggerated versions of what transpired. And last the objective truth captured buy the PI.
I can see this story being written with patients and really tease the reader through the events focusing a lot on the seduction and the using the different angels to describe events.
Ok that about sums it up, any thoughts?
Ive always had vivid imagination but as for writing the skill is underdeveloped to say the least.
The theme is a "loving wives" category. How much would you spend to realize a fantasy?
Ill start with a short summery of the characters then a base for the plot line.
=====
Char
=====
Main protagonist is the Husband. He has fantasies about his wife. He likes hearing about past experience with old boyfriends and wishes she was/had done a lot more naughty stuff before she got married. The husband wont confront his wife directly with his fantasy. The voyeuristic tendencies in him make for a more subterfuge approach to the issue. Age 30-35
The Wife, is not a prude by any means just your regular loving wife with some modesty and shyness. But deep down harbors some regret of never relay having a wild phase. Sheltered background, married relatively young just a couple of boyfriends. And of course very hot and dormant sexy, age 28-30
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sub char
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The stud, featuring the standard issue six pack and beer can dick. well we might need to give the character some more depth. and history. Like a student gets contacted by the husband through the net.
The private investigator. very secretive behind the scenes char. Mission goes first. Never strays from the mission at hand.
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Plot
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This is a wife sharing story with a twist. Husband wants to see wife do some naughty stuff.
He creates a plan to make it happen.
First he is going to send his wife on a vacation "they won a trip for 2 weeks (cruise? tropical island? boating?) but he cant go etc.", she will be going "alone".
What she doesn't know is the husband has hired "the stud" and he will be going on the same trip. With a mission of course to seduce the wife and report back to the husband. He will be making daily reports of the progress and attaching photos taken with his cellphone camera as proof. Besides getting a free vacation the stud has a list containing various acts and situations the husband would like his wife to experience. For every act the stud gets points and will in the end get an extra cash bonus as well a tip.
Example, dancing sexy with the stud or with multiple guys. Going topless on the beach. Going braless and pantiless. Acting naughty and teasing. Exposing her self. Giving a blowjob, sex, anal swallowing. Sex with two guys. the list goes on...
What both the wife and stud doesn't know is the husband has also hired a PI that will be going on the trip. He will be recording the seduction from afar, with cameras, bugging, hidden webcam in the room. He thinks it a regular "i don't trust my wife going alone job".
I think this outline gives opportunity to a lot if interesting and sexually loaded situations. Described from various points of view. Alternating the story telling from the Husbands fantasy expectations jealousy, trying to get his wife to tell him about her trip and events. The wives perspective with a bundle of mixed feelings from reluctance, shyness, regret and guilt to new sexual highs, diving in to her hidden desires. Trying to down play events when talking to her husband or describing a situation. Admitting bits and pieces along the way but maybe not the whole truth.
The studs agenda to seduce the wife and the reports to the husband with pictures and exaggerated versions of what transpired. And last the objective truth captured buy the PI.
I can see this story being written with patients and really tease the reader through the events focusing a lot on the seduction and the using the different angels to describe events.
Ok that about sums it up, any thoughts?
I just think he should have a lot of fun as well. Anyway, it is really a nice idea and would be worth a read!
