RonClarkeson
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Special Editor Sought (BDSM) for big novel 32 chapters
Male Writer seeking female editor with skills in a specific area.
Why female, because some of the dialogue is written as though the main female character is “speaking,” or actively ‘thinking.’ The scene being taken from a parallel chapter.
The specific area is submission/domination as the heroine of the story is a perverse submissive who surprises her master occasionally and there is a roll reversal. Read my Halloween stories for examples of this.
The characterization of the female is therefore an important part of the story line and I want to get it right. For example the slave is asked a question to which she replies, “Yes Master.” but is thinking, ‘what a Wimp.’
Warning this is a 200,000-word novel with a complex plot, an adventure into BD and SM with a dash of gay, incest non/compliance and almost everything else including the kitchen sink thrown in.
123 k Words ready to post (16 chapters of 30)
Male Writer seeking female editor with skills in a specific area.
Why female, because some of the dialogue is written as though the main female character is “speaking,” or actively ‘thinking.’ The scene being taken from a parallel chapter.
The specific area is submission/domination as the heroine of the story is a perverse submissive who surprises her master occasionally and there is a roll reversal. Read my Halloween stories for examples of this.
The characterization of the female is therefore an important part of the story line and I want to get it right. For example the slave is asked a question to which she replies, “Yes Master.” but is thinking, ‘what a Wimp.’
Warning this is a 200,000-word novel with a complex plot, an adventure into BD and SM with a dash of gay, incest non/compliance and almost everything else including the kitchen sink thrown in.
123 k Words ready to post (16 chapters of 30)
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