Spanking hotel

[Hellball]

I just submitted a story to literotica. Its something I wrote years ago, and was intended to be the beginning of a series, but I never followed up on it. Assuming the literotica crowd doesn't hate it, I'd like to do sequels. Its a very open ended story that can go all kinds of places, with each episode being at least somewhat standalone.

What we know from the first chapter: young, bisexual woman interviewed for a maid position at a spanking themed hotel. An estranged ex-boyfriend of hers is also working there, to both of their surprise. The two of them might try to get back together, but that's only one of many appealing possibilities. There are staff members, coworkers, and hotel guests who our heroine will interact with, and any number of stories that can be told and directions explored.

So, anyone got ideas for kinky adventures this maid can get herself into at the isolated resort? Here are the parameters:


-Other fetishes are fine, but spanking is going to be the most frequently recurring. Not EVERY chapter needs it, but most will.

-Main character is bisexual and a switch, but more submissive than dominant.

-While I'm comfortable writing gay male scenes, they don't really stimulate me. I can include a couple such scenes for variety in the margins, but I'm unlikely to put my all into them simply for lack of genuine interest.

-Tone is sexy, silly, and humorous, but there can be dark or uncomfortable bits as well.

-Due to the remote location of the resort, most or all of the staff live on location during their working seasons. As such, persistent relationships and sexual tension are inevitable, and the main character is likely to have one or more coworker roommates.

-I'd like a wide variety of characters, in personality and in appearance, that can create a variety of scenes. I'd prefer that everyone involved in the action be at least moderately good looking, but the occasional exception can work.

-I have two hard limits: blood, and scat (severe bruising and anal creampies are fine though ).


So, any ideas for scenes, characters, chapters, arcs? I'm all ears, and eager for ideas. I'd like to keep this going for as long as possible.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

Are the employees required to service the guests or is it strictly voluntary?

If voluntary, are they allowed to service guests during working hours?

I think this should be like a fantasy island or love boat type premise. Each chapter has two or three guests arriving, and then living out their fantasies with staff or the other guests, and then leaving happy and sated.

SOme could be funny, some dark, and some just totally fucked...
If you're willing maybe even let other authors use the premise and the hotel staff in their own take on the hotel...

I might be wiling to use it for part of a chapter in one of my series. Let us know when it posts, I'll read it and offer some ideas.

 

[RawHumor]

Sounds kinda like Exit to Eden.

 

[Hellball]

Sounds kinda like Exit to Eden.

That's one of my inspirations. Should have mentioned it in the OP.

Are the employees required to service the guests or is it strictly voluntary?

If voluntary, are they allowed to service guests during working hours?

Its THEORETICALLY voluntary in most cases. However, an employee who makes a habit of not satisfying the guests is unlikely to make it for long. In practice, you can weasel out of it sometimes, but doing it too often will see you discharged.

On the flip side, going above and beyond to please the guests is going to make your tips much better.

I think this should be like a fantasy island or love boat type premise. Each chapter has two or three guests arriving, and then living out their fantasies with staff or the other guests, and then leaving happy and sated.

SOme could be funny, some dark, and some just totally fucked...

That would work for many chapters. I'd want some guests to stay for longer periods though, and for the interactions between staff members to get just as much screentime.

If you're willing maybe even let other authors use the premise and the hotel staff in their own take on the hotel...

I might be wiling to use it for part of a chapter in one of my series. Let us know when it posts, I'll read it and offer some ideas.

Oh, I'd love that! Would be flattered. I'll let you know when its up.


Here's a list of characters I have so far:


MOESHA: the main character, at least so far. Very confident and self assured young woman, but still nervous as its her first time living away from home (and also her first time monetizing her sexuality, for that matter). Her inner city background was repressive toward some aspects of her sexuality, namely her bisexuality and attraction to nonblacks. She also hasn't been able to explore her kinkiness to any great degree, which was another major impetus for applying here. She finds herself in over her head at the hotel, but always finds a way to deal. In addition to wanting to explore herself, she's desperate for money so she can go to university.

BENJAMIN: middle class white boy. A few years ago, during his undergrad, he had a brief - but passionate - relationship with Moesha that neither of their families approved of, and that their socioeconomic circumstances made uncomfortable. He didn't do as well at university as his parents expected, and now finds himself in a tight spot to afford law school, which led to him finding a job as an outdoor sports guide at the resort. Humbled by this turn of events, he's been brought down to Moesha's social level in a sense. The two are still very attracted to each other, but there's a lot of pain and some resentment there too. When they were together, he was the one who spanked her, but in the first chapter the tables have already turned as he was coincidentally chosen for her to demonstrate on for her interview.

COURTNEY: another hotel maid who's been doing this for at least a couple of years, and (one of?) Moesha's roommate(s?). Courtney is mischievous, seductive, and has a cruel sense of humor. She delights in playing tricks and headgames on other people, especially ones that get them unfairly punished. She's also extremely promiscuous even by local standards; eager to give herself to guests and staff members who catch her fancy, and skilled at manipulating her coworkers into getting stuck with the guests she finds less desirable. She doesn't take herself too seriously though, and gets as good as she gives; she's also a fairly good loser, when she gets outmaneuvered.

Mr. ULNIK: the boss of this establishment. A very eccentric older European man who tries to present himself as something of a father figure to his employees, but clearly only cares about his bottom line. He doesn't appear often. When an employee has been sufficiently problematic, he steps in to handle the situation, which usually means a very intense caning in the event that they aren't discharged.


There's still a demand for all sorts. More maids, butlers, kitchen staff, hosts, entertainers, hell, even the janitors can get in on the action. Also, guests. Lots and lots of guests. Let me hear 'em!

 

[MatthewVett]

Well, just for my own fetishes, maybe she misplaces or stains her uniform, and as punishment, she has to go the rest of the day without it, cleaning rooms and going about the hotel either nude or wearing something very minimal, like an apron only.

 

[Hellball]

Well, just for my own fetishes, maybe she misplaces or stains her uniform, and as punishment, she has to go the rest of the day without it, cleaning rooms and going about the hotel either nude or wearing something very minimal, like an apron only.

Oh, I like that! Making her go around in tiny little thong and bikini top undies, cleaning rooms and maybe even doing a shift waitressing in the hotel restaurant. That could be a fun chapter, especially if there's someone to take advantage of the situation in some way.

 

[Hellball]

First chapter is up.

For some reason most of the second page got italicized. Not sure how that happened.

https://www.literotica.com/s/moesha-the-maid

 

[Hellball]

Nothing, eh?