Space Contest Voting Thread 1

Voting Poll 1

  • Blue Dolphin

    Votes: 1 6.7%
  • REDWAVE

    Votes: 2 13.3%
  • JUDO

    Votes: 4 26.7%
  • stargirl32

    Votes: 2 13.3%
  • Rybka

    Votes: 1 6.7%
  • Lauren.Hynde

    Votes: 5 33.3%

  • Total voters
    15

WickedEve

save an apple, eat eve
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I need 2 threads for all the entries. Please vote for only one poem.
 
Blue Dolphin

Space
this place
desired
through a curtain
of lace

where my finger probe
feel my tongue to enrobe
and space
in grace
I taste
 
REDWAVE

SEVEN OF NINE

Space ice vixen
I drool over you each time I watch Voyager
You have that dominatrix look down pat
You seem so cold, so harsh, so uncaring
And yet (in your form-fitting costume) so much a
woman
Even though I mostly go the other way
I would love to have you standing over my helpless
abject form
And hear you say: "Resistance is futile. You will
be dominated!"
Then you would release a velcro strip on your
oh-so-tight outfit
And your pink quivering glistening pussy would
leap out at my eager tongue
And you would say: "Eat my pussy, slave, and do it
real good-- and maybe I won't beat you up too
bad afterwards-- just slap you around a little"
And yes, I would eat your pussy to the very best
of my ability
(Though I'm much more adept at sucking cock)
And maybe, just maybe, you might even reciprocate
a little--
Although that's really too much for an abject
slave like me to hope for--
Until then, I remain your adoring worshipper from
afar
Back here in the Alpha Quadrant
Seven of Nine
My penis salutes you
 
JUDO

In All This Darkness

In all this darkness,
Only cold breezes to keep me company.
I'm tired from thoughts
Of arms surrounding -
Of eyes admiring -
Of lips kissing -

Listed to one side
My knees cramp, but I do not move.
Instead I watch the stars
From atop the bedcovers.

No moon to please the eye.
Only the deep emptiness remains
Where my tears flow freely.

And I wait -
For the one who will
Warm my belly -
Take my breath -
Wet my lips -
Spread my legs -

And fill the empty space
In all this darkness.
 
stargirl32

Selfish space,


A small macrocosm inside my brain.
A place of free ideas,
dreams that try to take flight.
My thoughts naked as a jay bird ,
But a naked jay bird can't fly far.
trapped Within the force field
of implied rejection and others disdain .
But as I dream and think , the space grows.
Forming a bubble of clear thought
Striving to be heard over the screaming silence of space.
 
Rybka

Space - haiku

SPACE

Spock's dingleberries
asteroids up Uranus
the final frontier
 
Lauren.Hynde

The Cage I

this grandeur of not having it
is lesser than not yearning for

and if the fee for existence is grandeur
count me out
I will not exist
I will not exist even against grandeur

I was born air
shaped into people

I was born light
shaped into people

I do not comprehend myself
I breathe myself
I see myself textual

this shape of people averts me from being air
averts me from being light

and I was born air in spite of this shape of people
and I was born light in spite of this shape of people

I was born before myself
before this shape of people

I was grand before being born
into this shape of people

but this shape of people doesn't let me be grand

this is my cage
this is the cage of my own making
this is the cage that keeps me pacing about in the smallest possible space

I don't want to break out
 
Voting will end Sunday night. Winner will be officially announced later that night or Monday morning.
 
Dingleberries kick ass!
If I was going to vote for a more serious selection, I would go with Laura
 
if only i had come across this thread earlier

Even though I really like Lauren Hynde's poem, I would have voted for Judo. I felt more emotion with Judo's piece. So surf chick, have you seen Blue Crush yet? :rose:
 
Yes, I have. What the FUCK are the idiot guys doing in this movie?

- Judo
 
good ?

They're just here to procreate. Is our species were truely intelligent, men would be born mutes. Anyways, did you like it? I haven't seen it yet. I didn't think Jennifer Rodriguez could pull off a surferchick. Lori Petty made a good one. But I bet Jennifer looks better in a wetsuit. Anyway, Lots of Love girl.

Infinite Connection :rose:
 
Well, the producer is a surfer, so the action sequences of surfing were spectacular. Not sure who was actually doing some of the incredible drop-ins (I think my heart would just stop), but amazing to watch.

;)
- Judo
 
I forgot what this thread is about.
Would someone please refresh me?



simple little and sane
complex huge and
also sane
what was a choice
becomes a noise
 
I've been meaning to check this thread out and see what you lunatics are doing on here! This is a voting thread, people! And the vote's closed!

Why do I hang around these people? Oh yeah, that's right. I'm a lunatic. :D
 
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