Soon...

[rikaaim]

This is just a notice thread of sorts. Very soon my first story shall be posted. It's been pending now for four days and I hope it gets put up soon. I only make this thread because:

A) It's my first story.

B) Many people I know have wanted me to inform them of when I finally post it.

Several people have taken a preview look at it and tell me it's good. I think it's mediocre, but I'll let public domain decide.

I would also like to say, since I'm wasting thread space anyway, that I would appreciate any and all feedback offering advice and criticism, constructive only please. Being my first story I would like to know how I can improve and fabulous writers frequent this venue, so I'm taking advantage.

I would also like to say here, amongst friends, that without the assitance of BlackShanglan I would not have made it this far. Thanks for being an editor, and more importantly, thank you for being a friend.

Thanks also to the many people I bugged to preview read. I've coerced so many I've forgotten all the names. I just don't want to forget and leave anyone out.

I'm really going on and on about nothing, but hey, that's what I do. Take it or leave it.

I do hope the story posts today or tomorrow and will post back here when it does. The link to all of my stories is in my signature.

 

[Guest]

Re: soon...

Well, about 5 years ago, you said, "Let me think about it."

Then, you said, "Soon..." about four years ago.

And then, the last year, you copped out.

So, I doubt anything good will come of it.

 

[mlady_france]

Well, about 5 years ago, you said, "Let me think about it."

Then, you said, "Soon..." about four years ago.

And then, the last year, you copped out.

So, I doubt anything good will come of it.

Has he been here that long?

 

[yui]

Has he been here that long?

Hi mlady,

Svet is playing with your mind. Rika hasn't been here for five years.


Pasha, very much looking forward to your story!

 

[mlady_france]

Hi mlady,

Svet is playing with your mind. Rika hasn't been here for five years.


Pasha, very much looking forward to your story!

Well there really is no trick in that. My mind is very easily tampered with.

 

[Virtual_Burlesque]

. . . I think it's mediocre, but I'll let public domain decide. . .

What!

You'd trust the care and feeding of your ego to the hoi polloi?

 

[Samandiriel]

What!

You'd trust the care and feeding of your ego to the hoi polloi?

And to the Ballyhoo and the Hunkydory.

Good luck to you Rika, I am also in pending on my first story.....to quote a movie....the suspense is killing me, I hope it lasts.

 

[Guest]

I just keep wondering is it arse, or are they tits?

Your essay is due on the 13th, anyway.

 

[rikaaim]

Well hell...

I submit the poem today and it's up already. I submitted the story Sunday and I'm still waiting. What gives?

 

[yui]

Well hell...

I submit the poem today and it's up already. I submitted the story Sunday and I'm still waiting. What gives?

The wait for stories is normal, pasha. The longest I've personally waited for a story to post was ten day. I developed ulsers and a nasty disposition in that time.

 

[rikaaim]

The wait for stories is normal, pasha. The longest I've personally waited for a story to post was ten day. I developed ulsers and a nasty disposition in that time.

You could appease me by reading my newest poem. *nudge nudge/ wink wink*

 

[yui]

You could appease me by reading my newest poem. *nudge nudge/ wink wink*

I could appease you in other ways, too.


I'll be happy to check out your new poem. Give me a minute to finish some correspondence and I'll give it the time it deserves.

 

[rikaaim]

I could appease you in other ways, too.


I'll be happy to check out your new poem. Give me a minute to finish some correspondence and I'll give it the time it deserves.

"It"? Or me?


please be me... please be me

 

[BlackShanglan]

Thanks, Rika, for the extremely kind words. It was entirely my pleasure. After you gave such supremely good advice on "Will," it was the least I could do.

Shanglan

 

[yui]

"It"? Or me?


please be me... please be me

I did "it" tonight. Saving you for later.

The poem was amazing. Wow. I'm impressed. RVCed.

 

[rikaaim]

I did "it" tonight. Saving you for later.

The poem was amazing. Wow. I'm impressed. RVCed.

Thank you very much for your kind comments on my newest poem. I'm just glad people get it. That's me in a nutshell now. I'm tired of compromissing who "I" am for the sake of other people. Especially when I know that I never did anything wrong. I still felt that I did and was constantly hurting people. This poem lets me get back to who I really am and what I like to do. Thanks again.

 

[rikaaim]

It's finally up!!!

Whooooo hooooo!!!

My first story has posted. I'm rather excited about it. I'm shamelessly begging for reads, votes, and definately feedback.