Something for the Romantics

[LadyTigeress]

I have to say I don't normally write Romantic Erotica, but this was a little difference. When my fiance' came to live with me, I actually did have some sexual dysfunction, and so this story was born. I have to say in all honesty that it didn't quite happen in this manner, but when dam burst so to speak, it was very relieving.

With that, I give you, "Parking" a short story.

C&C welcome

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=220011

 

[cheesy80s]

good job!

Hey, I really enjoyed that one. You have a knack with dialogue.
I only have two complaints: 1) I just feel it's rather too easy as a writer to have a character look into a mirror so you can describe them. Be a little more creative in that department. Mirrors are bad crutches, even rearview mirrors.
2) It ended too abruptly. I would have loved to hear what she had to say about cumming after all of that.