Something different

iamsidra

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I hope someone here thinks the following synopsis could be turned into a story.

Basic premise is that in India many men travel to middle east for work or in pursuit of a career often leaving their wife behind at least in the initial years and in case it is a white collar job then they may have their family join them but after years of service. Husband gets to visit yearly and that for 20 days plus. Often the couple has 1-2 kids. It is a joint family setup, usually in-law families are large. During husband's yearly visit, the wife does not get much time with her husband. Nearly all relatives friends take up those visiting days wives getting few hours in night and the psyche is such of an Indian woman that seeing husband after a year or so their is conflict yearning yet hesitation, familiarity yet strangeness. Regardless of her thoughts the husband is interested in being sated, often quick tired, w/o foreplay 5 minute escapades and she is left more thirsty then quenched.

The story revolves around such young wife. The female main character is educated middle class, in her late 20s 1-2 kids and is pretty but not a siren. She merits a second look but that is it, her husband is far so she keeps herself busy with kids, minding her in-law's house, looking after her in laws and no real reason to look her best while husband is not around. Having kids agreed with her, she has silky long straight hair which adds to her allure, 5.5, wheatish olive toned color, high cheeks, naturally thin, she has an old lady that visits does waxing of her privates, somehow she prefers it; lots of old ladies do that as a profession visiting homes..her skin blameless supple

After 1-3 years of husband being gone and 20+ days visit ritual plays out she is aware of something missing. Yet she is not too upset about her lack of sexual life if she is she ignores it; dutiful wife :)

At this juncture she is aware that she is lonley. The neighborhood store owner a little older man in 50s takes a liking ...attracted to her skin her body... tries every which way to get her attention to get to touch her to flirt...yet at home front certain accidental touches between her and her father in law wakes the man in the old man now he is interested...(there is plenty of room here where creative mind could create situations between the store owner and her own FIL) close calls, her struggle, her awakening, eventually forced by shop owner in his warehouse, even not wanting she 'allows' it again...giving in to FIL large extended family difficult short yet extremely potent powerful coming together trysts...when opportunity arise sometimes willingly sometimes FIL or shop owner looking for fun play time... transformation begins and continues

Maybe hard to know the cultural aspect and weave those situations and where freedom and sexual opportunities are not readily available, yet there indeed are those stolen moments that are very erotic and potent...(eventually while picking grocery the shop owner making her give a hand job, or molest her breasts quick gropes... meanwhile minding other shoppers or rare occasion where no one is in the shop a quickie ... accidentally bumping into FIL at night time while strolling on the roof as it is too hot to sleep and they going behind the water tank to steal some relief...) she gets to this stage of course after a slow buildup of course she is not a slut...and her becoming addicted to those powerful stolen moments, the odd place the odd position, the kinkiest of act....and her becoming turned off with her husband's definition of sex

so this is the idea. There are many opportunities if combined with some cultural and societal understanding and the challenge for the author to find liberation, lust, and passion in the most confining of opportunities.... and mostly this is how it happens even today...those stolen moments and exponential passion that is to be expressed in those short duration
 
Lovely idea

To ( hopefully ) add to the great idea:

The slow buildup would be the key part. Starting with just a lingering look and slowly progressing over weeks or months before full penetration. Bearing in mind that should she get caught with another man, the consequences would be dire. They would have to be very very cautious - and that would add to the suspense.

I would enjoy emphasis on the beautiful fabrics worn as saris or dresses by the women there. The silky rich beautiful fabrics could be a key part of the sensual play. Beautiful silky fabrics being pulled back and forth over sensitive spots when nobody is looking. mmmm.

Perhaps later in the story, a young attractive delivery-man may accidentally witness them - adding a 'do what I want or I'll tell' aspect, and increasing her responsibilities - like paying a tithe.

Just sayin' :)

chrisseee

:heart::heart:
 
Something

Thank you for your suggestion.

I suppose not many for slow burn eh lol...

I tell you from experience an animalistic quickie with the fear of someone happening upon us any minute while hiding in the shed on the roof for example was and is a hugely erotic ...
 
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