Couture
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Someone Taught Aimee Ch.1
Okay, there was some talk on one of the boards a while back. The person basically said that authors shouldn't write long serial stories as it showed that the authors were just too lazy to create new characters for another story. Well, I would like for them to read this story and tell me how you can get this kind of plot and character development in a one page short story.
In STA, Killer Muffin has created a wonderful world of sex and intrigue. The sex, I give an 8. Admittedly, I'm a pervert and I don't go for romance stories. Those that do, would probably give it a 10. It's also chapter 1, so it will probably heat up a bit as the chapters go on.
The story is awesome and I give it a 10. If you ever read stories by Nora Roberts or her (JR Robb) stuff, then you you will probably like this one as well. The gist is: Rich guy is engaged to girl. Guy cheats on girl. Girl leaves guy. Girl's sister goes over to guy's apartment with a deal.
After this, start getting interesting. Real interesting. If you want to know what happens next, then read the story. Only be prepared to be waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter to come out.
Okay, there was some talk on one of the boards a while back. The person basically said that authors shouldn't write long serial stories as it showed that the authors were just too lazy to create new characters for another story. Well, I would like for them to read this story and tell me how you can get this kind of plot and character development in a one page short story.
In STA, Killer Muffin has created a wonderful world of sex and intrigue. The sex, I give an 8. Admittedly, I'm a pervert and I don't go for romance stories. Those that do, would probably give it a 10. It's also chapter 1, so it will probably heat up a bit as the chapters go on.
The story is awesome and I give it a 10. If you ever read stories by Nora Roberts or her (JR Robb) stuff, then you you will probably like this one as well. The gist is: Rich guy is engaged to girl. Guy cheats on girl. Girl leaves guy. Girl's sister goes over to guy's apartment with a deal.
After this, start getting interesting. Real interesting. If you want to know what happens next, then read the story. Only be prepared to be waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter to come out.
