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while reading through what each forum was for I came across one that said we post there if we needed help with we could get help with a story. Now that I come back to it I am not sure if this is the place or not but in case it is here is one idea I had that I worked out mostly. If this is not the proper forum for this I am sure someone will tell me I do have three or so places that I am having problems with si here is what I have so far:
Have a story here that is at a place where I am stuck. Any help or advice would be appreciated.
Basically its a wife having an affair story. They have been married quite a few years and have three children. One is partly autistic. Therefore she needs a set order of things to happen. That includes her mother doing a certain things at bedtime. This night the mother is at the next door neighbor’s. The neighbor has jut gotten a divorce five months ago. And they have talked a lot. That night the wife is over there talking and its close to daughter’s bedtime so he goes over to get his wife and finds out they are in the back yard so he peaks over the fence to tell his wife its close to daughter’s bedtime. Through the trees on that side of each property he sees the neighbor sitting there and hears his wife behind her a bit. She says she be there soon. He ends up doing that three times before the wife comes home, half an hour after daughter’s usual bedtime, very unusual for his wife.
As she is putting daughter to bed he is out front watering, they can only water on certain days and things came up earlier to keep him from watering. He sees a man come out from the neighbor’s house and walk away. The husband watches him since his wife mentioned no man and he hadn’t seen this guy before. The man at one point hears the watering and turns looking at the husband. As he does he has a very satisfied look on his face then as he turns back the looks turns smug, very smug. The husband realizes the man had just had sex and from his smug expression that it was with his wife. Other clues fall into place in his mind. He feels betrayed, hurt and almost throws up on the lawn. He somehow manages to turn off the water and get inside. His wife is in the back now, she is either at the computer or he sits down at the computer and she comes along to talk. He decides to check her so without warning sticks his finger up the side of her shorts and into her panties. Then into her vagina. He has done this sort of thing a time or two and usually tells her its a down payment of what is to come. This time he does it quickly to make sure she can’t stop him. He gets one finger in her before she does grab his hand. She is obviously wet and as he tries to get it up further he feels that her panties seem wet too, maybe sticky. He doesn’t want to use too much force so he loses the fight and withdraws his hand. After she is gone he looks at his finger. There might be a bit of white something on it.
Nothing conclusive and even though in his heart he knows he still wants conclusive proof. Soon after he sees the guy at a business mall where he works. He learns the guy is an out of town salesmen for security firm. The lover spends lots of time in their city though. The husband gets an idea that they have had and will have soon sex in the master bedroom so he sets up a video camera but he has to be sneaky since the lover has a device to detect bugs. He sets it up so the camera will only come on for a minute while when the air conditioning comes on, hoping the AC would cover any spare electronic charges that could be detected. After a three or four days he watches the tape, lots of empty room and some of his wife cleaning or changing. Then pay dirt she is embracing someone. Someone with a bread like the man he saw. This time the picture is very fuzzy so its hard to make out who exactly it is but he can tell the man is about the same height of the lover. A second shot shows them in bed having sex. Still not clear in identity but obvious what they are doing.
Finally he finds out where lover is staying and goes to hotel to check it out. He finds out that the lover has a wife who shows up now and again. This wife maybe hard of hearing since the first couple times the man behind the check in counter called her by Mrs. so and so she didn’t hear and her husband had to tell her someone wanted her.
The husband brings a picture of his wife and shows it to the hotel person. The person says that is the Lover’s wife. As the husband is thinking about this, he sees the neighbor walk in, he hides as she goes to counter and talks then leaves. What is she doing here he wonders.
OK, here I was stuck for a while. I originally wanted the wife to be having an affair but when the neighbor shows up I changed it, Its the neighbor having the affair and the wife was helping because it started a couple months before the divorce. It didn’t cause it, the ex still not knowing his wife had been having one. And the husband forgot while watching the tape that the husband matches the description of the Lover, so it could have been him instead of the Lover in the recording. However, in that case, why would his wife pretend to be the Lover’s wife. For weeks I could not come up with an answer. If someone comes up with a good answer I might write two stories.
I say might because now I have come up with an idea. The Lover is having an affair with both the wife and neighbor and yes both know. In fact the wife did begin to help hide the affair but as the neighbor began to explain how good it was, the guy being a great lover and it being illicit added greatly to the thrill, the wife thinks and daydreams about and finally decided to go for it.
And no they do not do three ways. They sometimes do tag team sex but that is as close as they come to a three way.
This is where I need help again,
Now I got them so that husband finally tries of not being able to get conclusive proof and just, after sending the kids to grandmas for a few days, confronts his wife. After a while she admits it. She even admits the guy is an excellant lover Something the husband learns shocks him as bad as the first time but this time he does throw up. As he is in the bathroom she leaves. Why does she leave? Its important, maybe to pick up the neighbor at the hotel, to return some thing the Lover doesn’t know she borrowed?
He comes out of the bathroom and she is gone, he thinks it was to see the Lover. He follows her thinking she is headed toward the hotel. He arrives after traffic delays him, and some how gets into the Lover’s room. Maybe they forgot to lock the door? Anyway he sneaks in and peaks into the bedroom, He sees his wife naked embracing a dressed Lover. That's it, its over he thinks and leaves. He is really upset not only because of the affair but that she left him, in the middle of the confrontation and with him throwing up to go have sex with the man. He barely makes it home arrives home and throws up again. By now the wife is headed home she calls him on her cell phone. Asks where he is because she is afraid he left. He says in the bathroom, she says you still throwing up and he says no again throwing up. She doesn’t know why he was the second time but says she will be home soon and for him to wait. However he packs some things and leaves. He is gone when she gets there. No word form him, not even the next day. She tries to find him but nothing. His work doesn’t know either since he called up to take some personal time off. She knows that he won’t abandoned his kids so sooner or later he will show up.
Another bit of help here please.
What he doesn’t know is that even though his wife was naked, she was not having sex with the Lover. When they were embracing she had just told the Lover the affair was over. It was a good bye embrace, because the Lover would miss her and not just for the sex either. I am not sure why she was naked but it wasn’t to have sex or maybe it was for the Lover had convinced her to have one more quickie for the road. I am not sure.
I am also not sure where to go from here. I am a helpless romantic so they will get back together, probably, but what is the husband doing? Will he come back and throw her out first? Probably not. Will he insist on having his own affair, even a short one? Maybe.
And no she doesn’t leave because he is too wimpy, that is not the way this story is going.
Have a story here that is at a place where I am stuck. Any help or advice would be appreciated.
Basically its a wife having an affair story. They have been married quite a few years and have three children. One is partly autistic. Therefore she needs a set order of things to happen. That includes her mother doing a certain things at bedtime. This night the mother is at the next door neighbor’s. The neighbor has jut gotten a divorce five months ago. And they have talked a lot. That night the wife is over there talking and its close to daughter’s bedtime so he goes over to get his wife and finds out they are in the back yard so he peaks over the fence to tell his wife its close to daughter’s bedtime. Through the trees on that side of each property he sees the neighbor sitting there and hears his wife behind her a bit. She says she be there soon. He ends up doing that three times before the wife comes home, half an hour after daughter’s usual bedtime, very unusual for his wife.
As she is putting daughter to bed he is out front watering, they can only water on certain days and things came up earlier to keep him from watering. He sees a man come out from the neighbor’s house and walk away. The husband watches him since his wife mentioned no man and he hadn’t seen this guy before. The man at one point hears the watering and turns looking at the husband. As he does he has a very satisfied look on his face then as he turns back the looks turns smug, very smug. The husband realizes the man had just had sex and from his smug expression that it was with his wife. Other clues fall into place in his mind. He feels betrayed, hurt and almost throws up on the lawn. He somehow manages to turn off the water and get inside. His wife is in the back now, she is either at the computer or he sits down at the computer and she comes along to talk. He decides to check her so without warning sticks his finger up the side of her shorts and into her panties. Then into her vagina. He has done this sort of thing a time or two and usually tells her its a down payment of what is to come. This time he does it quickly to make sure she can’t stop him. He gets one finger in her before she does grab his hand. She is obviously wet and as he tries to get it up further he feels that her panties seem wet too, maybe sticky. He doesn’t want to use too much force so he loses the fight and withdraws his hand. After she is gone he looks at his finger. There might be a bit of white something on it.
Nothing conclusive and even though in his heart he knows he still wants conclusive proof. Soon after he sees the guy at a business mall where he works. He learns the guy is an out of town salesmen for security firm. The lover spends lots of time in their city though. The husband gets an idea that they have had and will have soon sex in the master bedroom so he sets up a video camera but he has to be sneaky since the lover has a device to detect bugs. He sets it up so the camera will only come on for a minute while when the air conditioning comes on, hoping the AC would cover any spare electronic charges that could be detected. After a three or four days he watches the tape, lots of empty room and some of his wife cleaning or changing. Then pay dirt she is embracing someone. Someone with a bread like the man he saw. This time the picture is very fuzzy so its hard to make out who exactly it is but he can tell the man is about the same height of the lover. A second shot shows them in bed having sex. Still not clear in identity but obvious what they are doing.
Finally he finds out where lover is staying and goes to hotel to check it out. He finds out that the lover has a wife who shows up now and again. This wife maybe hard of hearing since the first couple times the man behind the check in counter called her by Mrs. so and so she didn’t hear and her husband had to tell her someone wanted her.
The husband brings a picture of his wife and shows it to the hotel person. The person says that is the Lover’s wife. As the husband is thinking about this, he sees the neighbor walk in, he hides as she goes to counter and talks then leaves. What is she doing here he wonders.
OK, here I was stuck for a while. I originally wanted the wife to be having an affair but when the neighbor shows up I changed it, Its the neighbor having the affair and the wife was helping because it started a couple months before the divorce. It didn’t cause it, the ex still not knowing his wife had been having one. And the husband forgot while watching the tape that the husband matches the description of the Lover, so it could have been him instead of the Lover in the recording. However, in that case, why would his wife pretend to be the Lover’s wife. For weeks I could not come up with an answer. If someone comes up with a good answer I might write two stories.
I say might because now I have come up with an idea. The Lover is having an affair with both the wife and neighbor and yes both know. In fact the wife did begin to help hide the affair but as the neighbor began to explain how good it was, the guy being a great lover and it being illicit added greatly to the thrill, the wife thinks and daydreams about and finally decided to go for it.
And no they do not do three ways. They sometimes do tag team sex but that is as close as they come to a three way.
This is where I need help again,
Now I got them so that husband finally tries of not being able to get conclusive proof and just, after sending the kids to grandmas for a few days, confronts his wife. After a while she admits it. She even admits the guy is an excellant lover Something the husband learns shocks him as bad as the first time but this time he does throw up. As he is in the bathroom she leaves. Why does she leave? Its important, maybe to pick up the neighbor at the hotel, to return some thing the Lover doesn’t know she borrowed?
He comes out of the bathroom and she is gone, he thinks it was to see the Lover. He follows her thinking she is headed toward the hotel. He arrives after traffic delays him, and some how gets into the Lover’s room. Maybe they forgot to lock the door? Anyway he sneaks in and peaks into the bedroom, He sees his wife naked embracing a dressed Lover. That's it, its over he thinks and leaves. He is really upset not only because of the affair but that she left him, in the middle of the confrontation and with him throwing up to go have sex with the man. He barely makes it home arrives home and throws up again. By now the wife is headed home she calls him on her cell phone. Asks where he is because she is afraid he left. He says in the bathroom, she says you still throwing up and he says no again throwing up. She doesn’t know why he was the second time but says she will be home soon and for him to wait. However he packs some things and leaves. He is gone when she gets there. No word form him, not even the next day. She tries to find him but nothing. His work doesn’t know either since he called up to take some personal time off. She knows that he won’t abandoned his kids so sooner or later he will show up.
Another bit of help here please.
What he doesn’t know is that even though his wife was naked, she was not having sex with the Lover. When they were embracing she had just told the Lover the affair was over. It was a good bye embrace, because the Lover would miss her and not just for the sex either. I am not sure why she was naked but it wasn’t to have sex or maybe it was for the Lover had convinced her to have one more quickie for the road. I am not sure.
I am also not sure where to go from here. I am a helpless romantic so they will get back together, probably, but what is the husband doing? Will he come back and throw her out first? Probably not. Will he insist on having his own affair, even a short one? Maybe.
And no she doesn’t leave because he is too wimpy, that is not the way this story is going.
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