Some Haiku

[Zhuk]

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[obcy]

Zhuk's 50 haiku

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Zhuk, what happened? I have managed to save your link for myself, but others--possibly the future participants of this forum--may miss it.

I've read all your haiku which you have posted on that page. For my private considerations I have divided them into four groups. The largest group were the haiku which I liked a lot (and I believe that they were the best). The next largest group were the haiku which were extra interesting and at the same time still strong. The next group was fine but I was less taken by them. And finally, there were a couple which were too exotic to me and I didn't understand them (first I would have to learn about the items which were featured there).

Your haiku is nicely presented, each in a dark, gray rectangle (with darker upper and lower fields). I would also force more empty space above and below the rectangle, so that your haiku would not be crowded by the display of the external info.

You are a recognized haijin (haiku poet) these days. I remember with a sentiment that you were pretty new to poetry when you joined this forum a couple of years ago. How nice!

Best to you, Zhuk, and Happy New Year 2006, and for everybody,

Senna Jawa
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[wildsweetone]

Hi Zhuk and welcome to the Poetry Forum. i've been offline and i'm really sorry i missed your haiku. any chance of you copy and pasting them in here for me?

 

[Zhuk]

Guru ji

Guru ji,

It is better to be safe than sorry. Was an impulsive action. More an attempt at showing off, than anything else. Will mail you; it has been a while.

Thank you wildsweetone.

Zhuk

 

[Liar]

I'll be damned, didn't realize they were yours. Good ones.
I checked out the link when it was up, and I can't see any reason why you should take it down. Always good to have stuff to read for inspiration, if nothing else.

 

[Zhuk]

who said they were mine?

The point in showing off is that you should have something real good. Still a lot of ground to be covered.

I'll be damned, didn't realize they were yours. Good ones.
I checked out the link when it was up, and I can't see any reason why you should take it down. Always good to have stuff to read for inspiration, if nothing else.