Some great poems!

Uncle Pervey

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Hi friends. I just came from the New Poem section, and thought I'd draw your attention to some poems I enjoyed.
Lest He Paint Another, by Maria2394. I loved the imagery, and I suspect some symbolism I may have missed is there also! As an ex-painter I can relate with pictures depicting tragedies.
Come To Me, by dsoul, lightly erotic, but I found it more a moving story of love. An enjoyable read!
Dream Lover, by DiscreetPlay, was certainly my cup of tea, and I enjoyed it thoroughly!
Where Have You Gone, by SweetSexyStormy. A most alluring and moving condensed story of passionate lost love I could relate to immediately, and I did!
Bakeher, by WickedEve. As is only to be expected, my lady love has produced a wonderful read here, and if you miss reading it, it's your loss!!
Good reading to all of you from Uncle Pervey, DOME!
 
U R Right!

Oh you sweet thing you, grin. As usual, you are so, so right! I just finished DustyStar's poem, and like you, I found it great! If you send a message to DustyStar, pass on my compliments for a great, moving, and exciting poem! I would, if I could, but I can't so I shant! Talk about phonetics? Giggle giggle. Take care Love Bug! Uncle Pervey, Dome. Oops! You never did let me know if you saw my poem called WickedEve My WickedEve? Just for you Doll!
 
Uncle Pervey said:
Dream Lover, by DiscreetPlay, was certainly my cup of tea, and I enjoyed it thoroughly!



Uncle,

I'm very new to the world of erotic poetry. Dream Lover was my first try. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.

If you have the time, please tell me why it was your 'cup of tea'. Also, if there was anything you didn't like about it, I would like to know. I'm eager for feedback.

Discreetplay.
 
Loved it because...

The message is what I enjoyed, smile. Like you, believe it or not, I'm fairly new at this and, although I've been writing like mad, I dearly love erotic material, and try to be amusing, as well as
sex-sighting, grin. I think you've got a pretty good handle on what you're doing, so like me dear heart, keep writing, and feel free to contact me at jkb@cookeville.com" Yours truly, Uncle Pervey, "DOME!"
 
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