beths-virtue
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Aug 21, 2002
- Posts
- 253
hey all. in case no ones noticed, theres a thing or two happening on the thread,between me and another poet
but , any how, never beign an explicit person ,i am posting some feedback i recieved from my poem
Emotions Closet Cleaned
i told the sender i was posting here, and of course, hes ok with it
This message contains feedback for: beths-virtue
About the submission: Emotions Closet Cleaned
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments:
I rummage through my closet
Meaningful conversation lost
Nothing left of value
Why? I payed the cost
Time pulled from my wallet
Useless wrinkled bills
My credit cards maxed
My closet stuffed, spills
Memory's collected
Piled up in haste
Tattered and torn
Nothing here, waste
Wedding pictures
Bridal rings
Unmentionables
All useless things
Nothing in here
Stored for me
My emotions closet
Now lays empty
_Land
but , any how, never beign an explicit person ,i am posting some feedback i recieved from my poem
Emotions Closet Cleaned
i told the sender i was posting here, and of course, hes ok with it
This message contains feedback for: beths-virtue
About the submission: Emotions Closet Cleaned
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments:
I rummage through my closet
Meaningful conversation lost
Nothing left of value
Why? I payed the cost
Time pulled from my wallet
Useless wrinkled bills
My credit cards maxed
My closet stuffed, spills
Memory's collected
Piled up in haste
Tattered and torn
Nothing here, waste
Wedding pictures
Bridal rings
Unmentionables
All useless things
Nothing in here
Stored for me
My emotions closet
Now lays empty
_Land