Some constructive feedback

[WhiteTigerNipples]

Sorry, meant to post this on another website.Trying to juggle too many balls at once.

 

[sunandshadow]

Now that I've come out of hibernation and started submitting stories on a fairly regular basis, I would welcome some constructive feedback. I had hoped to get this from public and private comments on my stories from those who have read them, but as you doubtless know, most readers can't be bothered. I will welcome any and all comments. Thanks.

You should put links to your stories if you want people to read them.

 

[Darkniciad]

Aye, I tried to track you down in the Author's index and came up blank. Post a link to your submissions page here in the thread and I'm sure you'll get some helpful feedback.