Some advice please?

Sateema Lunasi

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I have had this story idea in my head for a very long time, about three years. I am finally writing it down. It is nowhere near finished, which is the reason I have not sent it in to Literotica yet. It is a work in beginning progress. If anyone would be so kind, could you take a look on my site where I have the story posted titled "Connamara" and let me know if this is going in a good direction. My insecurity is eating at me. I would like to hear what your opinions are.

http://thevision.ws/maralily/erotika.html

All of my other stories are listed there too if you want to take a look, but most of those are on Lit as well. Connamara is the one that is my pride and joy and I am hoping it does not sound ametuer or juvinile.

Thank you and best to you all,
Sateema
 
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