Soldier of her dreams. (OPen for one man)

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Allisons solider(OPen to one pm first)

Allison was to be wed today, to a man she really didn't love but she had waited a year, to move on it was time.. and she felt this was the only way to help her... she hadn't slept with her fiancee yet.. she had only been in love with one man her soldier the man of her dreams and love of her life.. the man she was supposed to marry but he was presumed dead over in the war... he was drafted and it killed her.. but he wrote her every day and she recieved the notice... I am sorry her brother told her but he is dead.. what the fuck she cried for months untill her fiance came and made her smile.. but noone could fill her heart of her solider .. little did she know he was not dead just presumed dead.

Allison stood in the small room getting ready for the wedding, she decided it was time, to get rid of her final memory of her true and only love... she went into her purse pulled his picture out and looked at it, so handsome so strong... she remembered the first time they met was in the park Allison was crying, cause her brother had been drafted and he had walked up to her told everything would be okay, and they had became friends and Allie had fallen for him. She sighed she just couldn't throw his picture away. http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n128/christieerin/Wedding%20dresses/Dress3a.jpg(Allisons dress)

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c91/an_8o8_gurlie/smalleranneh.jpg(Pic of allison)
 
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Seargent Malcolm MacDonald

Malcolm had been gone for a little over a year, presumed dead in a war that he didn't want to be in, but was drafted to. He missed his girlfriend deeply, and was wondering what she was doing. He had just gotten rescued from being a prisoner of war, and was home now. He decided that he needed to call her, and check to see if she was still around. He hadn't heard anything from anyone, for he hasn't seen anyone yet. He picked up his phone, and called the last number he had for her. "Please be home and ok Allison." He was telling himself while he heard the phone ring.

Malcolm MacDonald
Seargent in the USArmy, retired
23
6'
220 Pounds of muscle
Short Black hair
Green Eyes
Been gone do to being captured by the enemy, presumed KIA
He is wearing his Dress Greens, and standing at the bus stop right now, at a phone booth.

I hope that this is good enough for you for your soldier, I'm presuming it is set during the Vietnam War, or is it more recent?
 
Allison

Allison was at the church pacing her parents were both dead due to a car accident her brother was the one to walk her down the isle.. she heard her cell phone ringing but neither could find it, she was wearing a beautiful white gown a tube type dress that was tight up tight and flowed gracefully at her slim waist.. she was nervous she knew in her heart this wasn't the man she desired nor loved.. but he did love her.. and that was enough she hoped... the wedding wasn't for another hour... she sighed and sat down at the chiar in the corner of the small room.. She took her wallet out and looked at the picture of her beloved Malcome.. she could never give it up...

(We'll say its newer times)
 
Malcolm

Malcolm was wondering where Allison was, and she wasn't answering her cell phone. "Could she no longer have it?" He thought to himself with worry. He decided to call her brother, and see if he knew where she was. He dialed up his number, hoping that one of his oldest friends, the one who introduced Allison and him would know where she was. "Come on, someone be around."
 
Allison

Jack allies brother there were only two men in her life allowed to call her that was Malcome and jack answered the phone he was annoyed he didn't want his sister to go through this any more.. he answered rude... ''This better be good!'' He yelled he said aggrivated.. ''My sisters getting married'' He barked then knew it wasn't the recievers fault.
 
Malcolm

Malcolm let out a gasp. "Oh god please tell me that you didn't just say that Jack. Please tell me she was waiting for me, oh god, of course not, they probably told you guys I was dead. Ok, tell Ally that I still love her, but I understand." He gave him a couple of seconds to say something before he went to hang up. He thought better of it tho, "Where is she getting married at Jack, I would like to at least say hello."
 
Allison

Jack thought this was some sick joke could it be Malcome no he was dead over a year ago he died... his face went white... He couldn't let allie see him this way so he left her there.. he went in the hall and told this guy to stop playing games his sister had been hurt enough... and that if it was Malcome he should know the church it was to be the same one him and Allie both had been baptized as kids.
 
Malcolm

Malcolm knew exactly where it was, and also knew that he was a good half hour away, if he got a cab now. "Ok Jack, I'm a half hour away, please stall her while I get there. Please Jack, it is really me, and I will be there within the half hour to an hour, depending on whether or not I can get a cab. I will tell you all what happened when I get there." Before he can say anything , i hung up, and ran to the cab stand hopping in telling the driver which church to go to and telling him he would pay him triple if he got him there in 20 minutes or less.
 
Allison

Jack walked back in and smiled at Allison she was a vision... ''Are you sure about this?'' He asked genuinly he wasn't sure if he could believe that was Malcome and he couldn't tell her either... ''I am sure Jack I need to move on and you should too... I know Malcome was like a brother to you..'' She said as a tear rolled down her cheek he wiped it away... ''I am fine now really'' She said thoughtfully... ''I need to finish getting ready'' She said softly and began to put her make-up on. ''You go and tell Roger I will be a few minutes.''
 
Malcolm

Malcolm's cab came screeching in at the church, and he paid the cabby, and rushed into the church. He looked a bit out of breath, and in full dress uniform when he looked around. "Uh hi everyone, is Allie here?" It looked like they were just getting ready to start the wedding, with the wedding march, and everyone was standing watching, and glaring at him when he walked in. "Hey don't look at me like that, it isn't my fault that I'm late." He grinned and went to stand by the groom, so that Allie and Jack could see him. He whispered into his ear that he was the long lost love that they thought had been killed in the war.
 
Allison

Allison stood with her brother at the door awaiting it to be opened... ''Jack I.. thanks'' She said and he smiled at her... She was shaking and he could feel it as he held her arm gently in his as the doors opened they started walking she noticed Roger first and he smiled she was stunning... jack noticed a man different than the rest.,...''Malcome?'' He said softly and looked... allie looked over and wondered what the hell made him say that.. then she noticed too... ''Oh my god'' Was all she could say before she fainted..
 
Malcolm

Malcolme came running up the aisle to where Allie and Jack were. "Didn't you tell her that I was in town Jack." He knealed down next to her and took her up in his arms. "Come on Allie, this is your wedding day, it's not time for you to feint on us, like it's time for you long thought lost love to come back right." He tried to make a joke, but was failing miserably. "Is there someplace we can take her Jack?" He looked up at the one man he thought of as a brother for some time, and had a tear in his eyes. "You don't know how long it has been for me, thinking about you two and your family was the only thing that kept me alive in the POW camp." He whispered only loud enough for Jack to hear.
 
Allison

Jack instantly caught Allie and looked at Malcome as if he were seeing a ghost... ''I didn't think it was really you'' he said stunned, her fiancee was stunned and didn't seem to know what the hell was going on, when Malcome picked her up Jack led him to the small room he had just spoke to Allie in... ''I couldn't tell her I didn't think it was true myself... god we missed you'' Jack said softly and smiled.. the only thing that had kept Jack going was helping Allison get through the pain.. Jack talked to the wedding party and asked for some time they all agreed as did Allies furture husband.
 
Malcolm

Malcolm clapped Jack on the back and then tried to wake Allie up. "I'm sorry that I worried you guys, I'm also sorry that you had to go through this. She looks beautiful doesn't she Jack. I still love her, and just thinking about her mostly was what got me through it. I was captured by the enemy as a POW, didn't you guys wonder why they never found a body?" He looked at him and knew the answer, there were soldiers that they never found bodies for in wars before, and there would be again.

He looked down into Allies face and knew his decision right then. He placed a kiss on her lips, and then got up. He turned to Roger, who was standing there looking at him with wonder and nodded. "You better take good care of her sir, or you will have to answer to me." He then turned to Jack and smiled sadly. "I will call you in a couple of days Jack, maybe we can get together again and talk about old times. She looks happy, and I don't want to ruin her day anymore, I will leave." He got up and made his way to the door with a tear in his eyes.
 
Allison

Jack smiled at Malcome... ''She cried for months Malcome we really thought you were gone... Roger I am sorry if she had known she wouldn't marry you... I am sure she cares for you.. but Malcome was it for her... but shes true to her word and I am sure she'll marry you'' He shook Malcomes hand after he kissed Allie, he didn't think anyone could love her the way his friend had. After he left Allison started to slowly wake up.. and she didn't ask for Roger... ''Jack wheres Malcome?'' She asked softly... ''Or was that a dream... was he really alive?'' Allie asked she looked lost hurt and confused all at the same time... Roger had left the room to leave Jack to tend to his fiancee
 
Malcolme

Malcolme stood outside the church trying to tell himself that he was doing the right thing. "You know that she will do the right thing and Marry Roger, he can't be that bad. He sat down on the steps and shook his head. "Why did I come here, I knew that she was getting married, I knew that and I still came here. What was I thinking, that she would just dump Roger and run up to him, yah right she is going to do that, she would never do that." He got up and walked back into the church, he did promise her one thing, that he would be at her wedding, well then he thought it would be to him, but he knew that wasn't going to happen, so he slipped into the church, and sat in the back to watch the love of his life marry someone else.
 
Allison

Allison had tears in her eyes when she looked at jake.. ''Where is he Jake?'' Allie asked him softly frantic... ''I need to tell him that I was only Marrying Roger cause it was the right thing to do.. I never ever stopped loving him... I wanted to be his wife have a life with him forever'' She said crying now sobbing as well.. ''It hurts Jake so bad... someone is going to get hurt and I can't pick and choose'' She said lightly looking at him.
 
Malcolme

He was sitting there with the church full of people, and they were all looking at him with a look. He shook his head and hung it low. "I can't do this, she deserves to be happy, and it is hurting me to know that she was hurting so badly because I was considered lost." He sat there a few more minutes trying to think about what he was going to do when the music started again to announce the arrival of the bride. He stood with the others, with his hat off, waiting and watching where she was going to come out.

OOC: This is my last post til I get back online in a few hours, I will post a reply to your next post then. This is going to be interesting to see where this goes.
 
Allison

Allison looked at her brother... ''What am I going to do?'' She asked with her head in her hands... ''I don't want to hurt anyone'' She said gently and smiled softly at him.
 
Malcolme

Malcolme was wondering what was going on. He hoped that he wasn't the reason that things were going bad back there. He knew that he still loved her, and she probably still loved him, for she said she did, but she was supposed to be getting married today. He got up and went back to where she was to check things out. He knocked on the door and went in. "Everything all right in here guys?"
 
Allison

Allison was white all over and she was shaking slightly she looked to Jack for assurance the man she loved was back what was she to do she had tears in her eyes she didn't say anything when Malcome entered the room.
 
Malcolme

Malcolme walked up to Allison and knealed next to her. "Hey baby, how are you doing? You know you look absolutely beautiful, and it's killing me seeing you crying. You know I never could stand seeing you cry." He took a hanky out of his pocket, and dried her eyes. "You know, if your going to get married today, you are going to have to dry those eyes and fix your makeup." He grinned at her, and kissed her softly on the forehead. "I don't want to ruin your day Allie, I will do the only thing that is right. They say that you know that you love someone if you can take and watch that person marry someone else, and be happy for them, even tho you are hurting on the inside. I love you so much, and have loved you forever." He got up and looked at Jack with tears in his eyes.
 
Allison

Allie took a long deep breath when he wiped the tears from her eyes just like the time she found out her parents had gotten killed, just like the time she lost her job.. how could she ever marry another man... ''They also say that someone you love can never come back from the dead.. and that a person would never have to hurt someone unless they wanted to.. how can I marry someone I don't love... but making a promise and not keeping it is just as wrong'' She said gently and looked at him and then looked away
 
Malcolme

Malcolme looked at her and shook his head. "You shouldn't have to break promises, and even tho we have been in love for years, you have promised this Roger guy that you would marry him today. Why did you accept his proposal if you don't love him Allie? You have always been a bit silly like that. I still love you, and always will. Let's go get you married, even if it's not to me." He stood up, and helped her to her feet, pulling her into his arms, hugging her and holding his tears back so that he wouldn't ruin her dress.
 
Allison

Allison looked at him gently... not sure what to say did he not understand did he even care that she never wanted to move on... ''Its not silly.. I do care for him but your the only guy that i've ever loved... how can you say I am silly, I needed to move on it crushed me when you were killed'' She said angry now that he could seem to not even care.
 
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