Soldier Home Coming

[bouncingbetty]

Before my hubby retired from the Army, home comings after extended deployments were always exciting sexually. I've seen stories about the sex, but he liked to show me off to other men and I would like to see a story of me showing off before we get home.

a. when unit comes home, there is usually a formation where some high ranking officer speaks and families sit in stands, etc.
b. i was thinking of short skirt, showing my pussy to all the guys in his platoon, teasing all of them, maybe milling around talking to them later, etc.
c. hubby would really get off if I could tell him a story like this during sex.

anyone know of a story like this, or write one?

TIA

 

[Deadwood]

Its a very interesting story idea, and one with good potential I might add. I guess what an author would really need to know is how far would you take the teasing?

If you wanted the story to be heavy on clothing choice descriptions, teasing and exhibition descriptions, but have no real sex with the other members of the platoon, that would tend to send it into the fetish category. It would make for a very plausible storyline, but also rather dull as far as sexual content is concerned. Its not necessarily a story stopper, but not heavy on sex either.

Then again you could take the story to a point where the husband shares his wife with another platoon member, or group of platoon members. That spices up the story a bit, but can be hard to make believable. There are many couples out there that swing if you will, but they are in the minority. I once wrote a story such as this and I got a lot of people that read it and said "that would never happen." So now I stay away from these kind of stories.

The most believable storyline, and one that involves a lot of sexual content, emotion and power struggle is one where the wife shows off during the home coming speech for her husband, and goes a little too far. Maybe its all those months out in the sand away from western women, or maybe its just jealous that they have no women to come home too, but ultimately the story leads to the wife having unconsented sex with a member of the platoon, or a group of platoon soldiers. Now granted that is definitely hard-core story writing and many do not enjoy writing or reading that kind of thing. That is where I would take the story, but that is just me.

Anyway those are a few idea I had on this story idea. maybe it will generate some other thoughts.

By the way, tell your husband thank you for his service to this country. It never ceases to impress me that a total stranger would be willing to give his life for our freedom.

 

[bouncingbetty]

Its a very interesting story idea, and one with good potential I might add. I guess what an author would really need to know is how far would you take the teasing?

If you wanted the story to be heavy on clothing choice descriptions, teasing and exhibition descriptions, but have no real sex with the other members of the platoon, that would tend to send it into the fetish category. It would make for a very plausible storyline, but also rather dull as far as sexual content is concerned. Its not necessarily a story stopper, but not heavy on sex either.

Then again you could take the story to a point where the husband shares his wife with another platoon member, or group of platoon members. That spices up the story a bit, but can be hard to make believable. There are many couples out there that swing if you will, but they are in the minority. I once wrote a story such as this and I got a lot of people that read it and said "that would never happen." So now I stay away from these kind of stories.

The most believable storyline, and one that involves a lot of sexual content, emotion and power struggle is one where the wife shows off during the home coming speech for her husband, and goes a little too far. Maybe its all those months out in the sand away from western women, or maybe its just jealous that they have no women to come home too, but ultimately the story leads to the wife having unconsented sex with a member of the platoon, or a group of platoon soldiers. Now granted that is definitely hard-core story writing and many do not enjoy writing or reading that kind of thing. That is where I would take the story, but that is just me.

Anyway those are a few idea I had on this story idea. maybe it will generate some other thoughts.

By the way, tell your husband thank you for his service to this country. It never ceases to impress me that a total stranger would be willing to give his life for our freedom.

I like the different ideas you put forth - and would definitely go all the way with the tease. He doesn't like to share me, but when we "talk" about stories when having sex, we both really get off when I'm "shared."

 

[TitianaPeaks]

Total sidebar to the ideas - I never got a formation when I came home from being deployed, your husband is lucky. Hell, I didn't even get met at the airport. Anywho.........

Teasing a just-returning-servicemember that's been out of the loop sexually? Brave woman....I wouldn't tease all the way, though. There's only so much a deprived man can handle, regardless of military training. Tease til he's begging....then let him loose and let the animal take over. Just my 2 cents.

Sharing is a nice idea, maybe something subtle? Along the lines of in a semi-private corner of the airport when he jogs off the plane?? This way, your experience is shared, but he's not sharing you personally with the rest of the unit.

Tell your husband, from one veteran to another, thanks for what you do.