Soccer/Baseball Moms

[wildp]

Had a thought about a group of moms all of whom sons play on a traveling baseball team. The season is long and winding down. While the dads help coach and strategize, the moms are the work horse. Planning the trips, clean uniforms and all that. They are all friends as are their sons other than one boy.
His mother passed a few years ago so I’d just his dad. The ladies don’t know him very well and neither do the dads. They all help his son and all the moms want to know more because the dad is a little younger and handsome.
As the season ends the moms plan a ladies night at one of their houses to celebrate the end of travel season. The dads and boys will all be away at a post season training event. As plans are made and wine ordered they decide to get a stripper. They call a company and one is arranged
The night of the party the wine is flowing and a knock at the door. Door is opened and in walks the stripper. It is the single dad of the boy on the team.

Just an incomplete I idea I have been thinking

 

[Rob_Royale]

It's not a bad idea, but once you put moms and sons in a story, readers will expect incest. So an alternative would be the moms from the PTA. This puts them all squarely in the prime MILF age group, and their kids are only superfically involved. Our young man is ... a handsome young former student, who had a career ending injury in college and was never bright enough to pass and get a degree. So now he's back at the high school as an assistant coach. But it doesn't quite pay enough.

Or something like that. Good luck with it.