So this couple...

[hmmnmm]

they're on their way to a particular place, and they take a turnoff to get a bite to eat, but the place they end up in is like... they cross into a sort of really weird erotic twilight zone.

Then...? I keep getting one idea, then another, then another. Can't seem to settle on the best.

the latest involves the couple getting captured, and they get turned into intersexuals, and... well, I don't know...

Is that too far-fetched?

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... Is that too far-fetched?

Nothing is too far-fetched.

 

[sirhugs]

write it. people will read it if you do it well

 

[hmmnmm]

write it. people will read it if you do it well

Hm. Another complication. Getting in written words what you can see: tempting to just leave it in mind.

Ditching the intersexual idea. They still get captured or trapped. But... who, why, where? What happens?

Thanks.

 

[Carnevil9]

"Intersexual"? Is that like a hermaphrodite?

 

[sirhugs]

Hm. Another complication. Getting in written words what you can see: tempting to just leave it in mind.

Ditching the intersexual idea. They still get captured or trapped. But... who, why, where? What happens?

Thanks.

well, some people will read it regardless, even if its not well written

others will read a bit to find out.

and if the smut is hot, no one cares if it is well written

 

[hmmnmm]

"Intersexual"? Is that like a hermaphrodite?

I thought it was hermaphrodite. And apparently it was. But the presently preferred terminology (according to my meager understanding) is 'intersexual' but it doesn't really matter now, since the hermaphrodite/intersexual angle has been ditched.

 

[jeninflorida]

intersexuals?

they're on their way to a particular place, and they take a turnoff to get a bite to eat, but the place they end up in is like... they cross into a sort of really weird erotic twilight zone.

Then...? I keep getting one idea, then another, then another. Can't seem to settle on the best.

the latest involves the couple getting captured, and they get turned into intersexuals, and... well, I don't know...

Is that too far-fetched?

 

[hmmnmm]

well, some people will read it regardless, even if its not well written

others will read a bit to find out.

and if the smut is hot, no one cares if it is well written

Soon as I get some ink I'll print this and tack it to the wall.

 

[hmmnmm]

intersexuals?

hermaphrodites. I think.