So I walked in the...

galaxygoddess

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Wait, that's not right *erase erase*


I opened the door, and...


grrrr.... *erase*

She flung open the door...

GAH!

So, who can write the best "walking in the door line"?


You wanted it, here it is :D
 
Why is she walking into the room?
What will she find when she gets there?
What is her mood?

From that, I can get her into the room.
 
I have to.... I just have to.....

"I kiked in her dor and camed in her fas."
 
galaxygoddess said:
Wait, that's not right *erase erase*


I opened the door, and...


grrrr.... *erase*

She flung open the door...

GAH!

So, who can write the best "walking in the door line"?


You wanted it, here it is :D

I stumbled into the door which was already slightly ajar. My awkward tumble sent me careening through it, slipping, falling forward and face-butting a mason jar that was leaking honey on the floor.
 
Ted-E-Bare said:
Why is she walking into the room?
What will she find when she gets there?
What is her mood?

From that, I can get her into the room.


Absolutely ANYTHING you want, someone just has to be walking through a door :D
 
I tripped on the top step, dropped my keys, and finally got the damn door open. It had been a long, unpleasant day. I half expected to find the dog had shit on the rug. He hadn't, but then neither did he run to meet me.

Instead, he was in the living room playing ball with Nate.

"Nate!", I squealed. "When did you get in?" Before he could answer, I had flung myself into his arms, pushing him back on the couch. His answer could wait, as our lips came crashing together.
 
She stood at the door holding a bundle of pink lilies. Slowly she caressed one of the pink waxy petals with her fingertips wondering if she should go in or not. For a brief moment she just took in the smell of the flowers and the way they looked. Her fingers slowly rubbed over the pink flesh releasing their aroma.

Finally, she slid a slender manicured hand out and touched the doorknob. Should she or shouldn't she? Did she really belong here in this moment? A soft smile lit her face as she once again tipped her head to smell the lilies. A deep breath and she turned the knob and walked in the room with the confidence of a queen.


Ok that isnt very good but where is V? I think I just finished my assignment! :D
 
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Salvor-Hardon said:
I have to.... I just have to.....

"I kiked in her dor and camed in her fas."

I :heart: you. :D

(and I miss MathGirl)
 
And now that it's an official topic, I can't come up with anything new :p (I should have written down every idea in my head while I was waiting).
 
TheeGoatPig said:
And now that it's an official topic, I can't come up with anything new :p (I should have written down every idea in my head while I was waiting).

BWUAHAHAH

welcome to my world ;.;
 
cloudy said:
I :heart: you. :D

(and I miss MathGirl)
Sigh, me too.

You couldn't come up with such a character. A dimunitive, spirited, wealthy, baseball fan, irrelevant, math prodigy with a hot aunt.

Last we heard, she was in poor health. I really wish I knew if she just left Lit, or if it was something worse.

I always fantacised about being back in the Bay Area for a visit. One relative back there moves in august circles, and at one of her events, I meet a small, intelligent Ph.D. in Math. I work the conversation around to the Giants, and find out she's a fan. Then I purposely bring up a couple more things I know MG knew about.

As we leave the party, my wife & I, I bide my time, and then when no one is looking, lean over and whisper, "Nice to meet you MathGirl" as I exit, leaving her to wonder which AH'er I was.
 
"Well, if you must know, I kicked in the door, rolled in a grenade and went on to the next door."

The doctor looked at the old man over his glass. "I'm not talking about the war, I'm talking about your mother-in-laws house."

"So am I." The old man replied with a maniacal grin.
 
Nice one, TXRad. :)

A horse walked through the door.

"Bugger all," swore Stella, staring at the ruins of the frame hanging off the horse's shoulders. "Damnit, Shanglan, next time open it first."
 
BlackShanglan said:
Nice one, TXRad. :)

A horse walked through the door.

"Bugger all," swore Stella, staring at the ruins of the frame hanging off the horse's shoulders. "Damnit, Shanglan, next time open it first."

She slapped the crop against her thigh as she entered the stable, startling the big, black horse. This one needs discipline, she mused.

:kiss:
 
BlackShanglan said:
A horse walked through the door.

"Bugger all," swore Stella, staring at the ruins of the frame hanging off the horse's shoulders. "Damnit, Shanglan, next time open it first."
Shang, hung over and in no mood for Stella today, turns tail to Stella. The tail rises...
 
Rick sighed softly as he flicked the switch, light flooded the dark apartment. Collie, his yellow crested cockatoo squawked a demand of hunger.
 
galaxygoddess said:
Rick sighed softly as he flicked the switch, light flooded the dark apartment. Collie, his yellow crested cockatoo squawked a demand of hunger.

Please, don't name the bird "Collie."
 
Sarah rushed through the door, pausing to take satisfaction in the sound of it crashing shut behind her.

"You want to tell me what the hell is going on?"
 
Ahh, collie is the name of a real bird a friend of mine owns. I can change it for my story though.
 
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