So I like u guys better than those in the poetry threads....

[christcat69]

Vampyr's Kiss

Longing behind those eyes,
Desire bursting from our loins,
Never feeling so alive-
In death.

Emotions clarified and animated,
Blood trickling from your dainty neck,
Tastes sweet upon my blue lips-
After life.

Vision so pure now,
Tight lips moisten to my touch,
Feels like never before-
In this moment.




Ok so tell me what you think of it before I go and put it in my writings. Thanks guys.

 

[DarkAngel]

You like us?


You need help!


Can anyone direct christcat69 to a good metal unit.

 

[christcat69]

Well I'd like to taste your blood....lol.

 

[DarkAngel]

Well I'd like to taste your blood....lol.

mmm... Okay!.. But don't be surprised if it tastes like <olson Canadian.


BTW, your peom is good.

 

[LacyLady]

I like the poem

 

[christcat69]

This is why I like you guys better, you have better taste.

 

[christcat69]

uhhh... I mean you taste better.

 

[DarkAngel]

This is why I like you guys better, you have better taste.

So, will that be 1 or 2 pints?

 

[christcat69]

2 pints-- downed with some champagne.

 

[DarkAngel]

You got it....


No Champagne please, bad memories with Champagne and orange juice.

 

[christcat69]

So what's up guys? You cum to literotica but don't give comments on writing? Where have all the cool people gone?