Smirnoff twisted

[Never]

One of the problems of writing a new porn story is distinguishing it from every other porn story. How many times have you seen these situations?

Mom stumbles upon her son masturbating and becomes aroused…
Man uses hypnosis to make women his sex slaves…
Man comes home to find his wife with another man…

If you're like me, you've seen these situations and others like them dozens of times. Naturally, they've become *boring*. Why not use our ingenuity to come up with situations that we haven't read before? To twist them up a bit?

Let's start with the first one:

Mom stumbles upon her son masturbating and becomes aroused…

I can understand the rational behind this one. Mom would have seen her son day in and out for years so the author has to set up a situation in which her viewpoint of him suddenly changes from a maternal one to a sexual one. It's not enough for her to look up at him munching on Cheerios one morning and think, "I never noticed this before but my son is a sexy stud!"

So, what situations can we come up with that will twist this stereotypical porn opener into something different?

 

[bisexplicit]

What if it is simply made more realisitc?

She sees her son masturbating, it sparks arousal in her - but also embarassment. Rather than seducing him, she goes and masturbates. Her guilt, afterwards, though, is incredible, and she tells her adult son that he needs to move out. She thinks, that way, she'll be cutting off any sort of temptation.

Now, the story could end that way - or perhaps there could be some way (maybe even after the son leaves) that they end up hooking up.

 

[sirhugs]

What if it is simply made more realisitc?

She sees her son masturbating, it sparks arousal in her - but also embarassment. Rather than seducing him, she goes and masturbates. Her guilt, afterwards, though, is incredible, and she tells her adult son that he needs to move out. She thinks, that way, she'll be cutting off any sort of temptation.

Now, the story could end that way - or perhaps there could be some way (maybe even after the son leaves) that they end up hooking up.

as in he moves out, but visits for a holiday ( always need contest plots). she's been building more elaborate fantasies the whole time, and dressing more sexy. he notices the latter. being virile, he feels the need to relieve his load....

 

[only_more_so]

Well, I once heard that men tend to find and marry women who remind them of their mother, and that women tend to find men that remind them of their father...

Anyway, son comes home for a visit with his fiancee who from behind bears a striking resemblance to dear old mom. Son thinks mom is at the grocery store and his fiancee is washing the dishes (or something else that requires her back towards him). He whips it out and starts stroking, preparing for a quick entry, when she turns around it is mom instead.

 

[only_more_so]

Or a little more along the lines of mom catches son masturbating and becomes aroused...

She turns into a voyeur and starts arranging to oversee her sons sessions. That isn't good enough any longer and she starts arranging trysts with women for her son, that she can watch. Maybe then the son catches her masturbating.

 

[amysecret]

How about a vacation awry(sp?)

A cruise just the two of them. he bought it for her 50th birthday present? or she bought it for him as a graduation present.

At some point during the cruise they decie to stop eating and gambling to check the differant lounges for curiosity, dancing, and a drink. The dj plays a silly love song. they decide to dance innocently but a lot can happen during a silly 4 minute love song. Not to mention there are at least two more ports and both very romantic and tropical.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

A Twist

You're looking at it all wrong. The story starts with the death of a mother's mother and the discovery of a hidden diary. As the mother reads the diary she begins to see a story unfold where the mother's mother reveals a heartfelt desire for her son. This plants the erotic seed that causes the mother to view her son differently. And then when she sees him masturbating, it triggers the memory of that diary. She'd have to see him several times and slowly build that forbidden desire to be more believable. Maybe she masturbates thinking about him.

This might be a nice twist.

 

[sirhugs]

You're looking at it all wrong. The story starts with the death of a mother's mother and the discovery of a hidden diary. As the mother reads the diary she begins to see a story unfold where the mother's mother reveals a heartfelt desire for her son. This plants the erotic seed that causes the mother to view her son differently. And then when she sees him masturbating, it triggers the memory of that diary. She'd have to see him several times and slowly build that forbidden desire to be more believable. Maybe she masturbates thinking about him.

This might be a nice twist.

I like it.

I don't think others are wrong, just different. But I do like this one....

maybe we find out that the Mom is the incestuous love child of her Mom and brother?

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Interesting...

Sirhugs has added another twist. There are so many possibilities for twisted minds like ours.

 

[handlebars69]

I'm here for the smirnoff




wait a minute, where the hell is it?




I know what your saying about the repetative stories though, thats how I ended up here, I was looking for something different, and thats what brought me back here to story ideas once more... I suppose my interests have changed as I've gotten older however some of the stories that I've seen that started as ideas here have been my favorite, I mean, I think of sirhugs almost daily at work when I see a regular and I'm like "I'd hit it." after they leave (I dont think I'd ever be able to thank him enough for that customer appreciation story )

anyways, moving on. I think with incest its particualarly challenging because its so hard to keep it realistic while trying new things. I mean, that mom/son thing that was mentioned it kinda iffy, I mean, I dont see how it would really end up happening. and the daddy/daughter "I want you to make me a woman" is another one thats just ridiculous keeping in mind the 18+ rule. I've always been more into the blackmail, non consent stories when it comes to incest, they just seem more real to me and if I'm going to fantasize about anything like that I'd rather it be as real as possible.

 

[sirhugs]

I'm here for the smirnoff




wait a minute, where the hell is it?




I know what your saying about the repetative stories though, thats how I ended up here, I was looking for something different, and thats what brought me back here to story ideas once more... I suppose my interests have changed as I've gotten older however some of the stories that I've seen that started as ideas here have been my favorite, I mean, I think of sirhugs almost daily at work when I see a regular and I'm like "I'd hit it." after they leave (I dont think I'd ever be able to thank him enough for that customer appreciation story )

anyways, moving on. I think with incest its particualarly challenging because its so hard to keep it realistic while trying new things. I mean, that mom/son thing that was mentioned it kinda iffy, I mean, I dont see how it would really end up happening. and the daddy/daughter "I want you to make me a woman" is another one thats just ridiculous keeping in mind the 18+ rule. I've always been more into the blackmail, non consent stories when it comes to incest, they just seem more real to me and if I'm going to fantasize about anything like that I'd rather it be as real as possible.

funny, I never see blackmail as realistic, more like a contrived plot device. Odd how different folks see things 180 degrees off.

meanwhile, busy here being flattered you think of me, perhaps in a 'dirty daughterly' way?

 

[zephrbabe]

Does this even make sense?

I liked the idea of the son's fiancee being similar to the mom, although the mentioned occurrence of a child marrying someone similar to their opposite-gender parent is linked more to mannerisms and habits than actual looks. It's still a good idea, though.

Personally, I think there should be more stories with an Oedipus/Electra-complex going on. It seems that in a lot of the parent/child stories, there's only one parent. Of course, there are plenty of stories with the entire family getting together, but there seems little of the chase in these kind of stories.

What I mean is- using the mother/son example- the son doesn't have to compete with his father (or sibling) for the mother's attentions. It's back to the unrealistic simplicity of the mom becoming aroused at one instance of seeing her son masturbating; there's no chase, no competition, no external motivation besides sex. It seems almost like a waiter coming to serve a woman who is waiting for a date who never shows up, so she takes him home instead.

-Kathryn

 

[handlebars69]

funny, I never see blackmail as realistic, more like a contrived plot device. Odd how different folks see things 180 degrees off.

meanwhile, busy here being flattered you think of me, perhaps in a 'dirty daughterly' way?

speaking of the 'dirty daughterly way' another one that sometimes works is internet roleplaying, like when a girl tells an older man about how she sometimes fantasizes about her dad and so he becomes her dad as they continue talking, only to meet and realize that it really is her dad. those stories usually have to be long though, because lets face it, how many people in real life, would meet someone they just started talking to online? I know I sure wouldnt, even though I once did, and looking back, it was pretty stupid but I was young. now, getting back onto the black mail thing, my brother knew I had met people, he even knew about how I was stranded out in the middle of nowhere at 3 am christmas morning after going late night off road driving when I was 15... I had snuck out after cerfew and didnt get home till 7 am, I was relieved to see no one was awake until he walked into the kitchen, I knew I was busted and when you were on thin ice with my mom like I was at the time, woo boy you would do anything to keep her from finding out. luckily I didnt have to.

 

[only_more_so]

Personally, I think there should be more stories with an Oedipus/Electra-complex going on. It seems that in a lot of the parent/child stories, there's only one parent. Of course, there are plenty of stories with the entire family getting together, but there seems little of the chase in these kind of stories.

Well as long as you are going Oedipal, why not have the son actually kill the father? Maybe not literally, but in some way that makes him feel responsible, like he was driving the car when they got blindsided by a drunk driver. Then the son takes on responsibilities around the house that are normally the dad's duty, making the mother see him in a different light.

 

[zephrbabe]

Why not have the son actually kill the father? Maybe not literally, but in some way that makes him feel responsible, (...) then the son takes on responsibilities around the house that are normally the dad's duty, making the mother see him in a different light.

That sounds pretty good, at least it sounds like a more realistic situation.

However, I was thinking more along the lines of the father being cuckolded by his own son. The dad's still around, and he could be completely unaware of the burgeoning relationship between his wife and child. Or maybe he discovers what's going on, but can't win the wife back for whatever reason (maybe he was ignoring her, or cheating on her, and her relationship with their son could be seen as revenge).

-Kathryn

 

[only_more_so]

What if the dad ends up crippled, maybe a paraplegic, so he is still around to be cuckolded, but the son still has to step up and be the man. That son is going to end up all kinds of screwed up if the scenario plays out. Gets in an accident which cripples his dad, ends up banging his mom, rubbing salts into his dad's wounds.

 

[amysecret]

For incest stories to read, seem, and feel realistic there needs author needs extreme patience with an attention to second thoughts and erotic tenstion versus the typical oh mom/dad/son/daughter wants me so why not wham bam thank you maam and it is over.