Slumber Parties- Done to death?

Slumber Parties: Done to Death?

  • Yes, who needs them?

    Votes: 2 8.7%
  • Maybe, but always like new twists

    Votes: 12 52.2%
  • No, they are a great idea

    Votes: 4 17.4%
  • No, but they need a fresh angle

    Votes: 5 21.7%

  • Total voters
    23

sirhugs

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What is your opinion?

If not DTD, what variations are new and exciting?
 
The theme always has that appeal unfortunately most of the stories I have come across are the same. Young girl (18) has her friends over brother gets involved, not always incestously but you get the picture.
 
Speaking as a female, slumber parties ended when middle school did. I never had one while in high school, and certainly not after I became a legal adult.

How often do 18 year olds really have them? Is it a myth to get men horny?
 
I don't think the whole slumber party thing is that bad, if its done right. If all the girls are going to have sex with eachother, only have 3 or 4 girls there. I know its been done to death, but a truth or dare thing could happen. Its sort of a cliche, but not many authors really get it right. They instantly jump into the lesbian sex talk. It should be paced a little slower than that, and lead into it more innocently at first.
 
We had slumber parties in college all the time. Whenever one of us broke up with her steady or got a bad grade. Nothing overtly sexual ever came of them, but there was a degree of sexual tension sometimes.

For your variation Sir have you considered a class reunion. Suppose four friends all come back for the 20 year reunion and stay at the home of the one girl who never left town. 4 thirty somethines, trying to recapture their youth and injecting their life experience into what is going on might give you a whole lot of angles for sexual shenannigans as well as some poignant moments and nostalgic reminisances.

-Colly
 
Colleen Thomas said:
For your variation Sir have you considered a class reunion. Suppose four friends all come back for the 20 year reunion and stay at the home of the one girl who never left town. 4 thirty somethings, trying to recapture their youth and injecting their life experience into what is going on might give you a whole lot of angles for sexual shenannigans as well as some poignant moments and nostalgic reminisances.

-Colly

Now this is a great idea! See? This, to me anyway, explains adults having a "slumber party" without the cliche just-turned-eighteen-year-olds still acting like innocent children one minute and slut the next.
 
Colleen Thomas said:
We had slumber parties in college all the time. Whenever one of us broke up with her steady or got a bad grade. Nothing overtly sexual ever came of them, but there was a degree of sexual tension sometimes.

For your variation Sir have you considered a class reunion. Suppose four friends all come back for the 20 year reunion and stay at the home of the one girl who never left town. 4 thirty somethines, trying to recapture their youth and injecting their life experience into what is going on might give you a whole lot of angles for sexual shenannigans as well as some poignant moments and nostalgic reminisances.

-Colly

oh, I'm just the :devil: advocate, Colly...unlikely to write one, but thought we neeeded a new topic
 
sirhugs said:
oh, I'm just the :devil: advocate, Colly...unlikely to write one, but thought we neeeded a new topic

Well, lesbian erotica is my gig i suppose I can give on a shot. Lord knows I am drawing writers block on my other works. :)

-Colly
 
Slumber Parties- Done to death?
No more than any of the other common themes, like widowed/divorced mom consoled by son, or demure shy wife discovers she's a nymphomaniac the first time one of her husband's friends touches her hand.
 
Colleen Thomas said:
Well, lesbian erotica is my gig i suppose I can give on a shot. Lord knows I am drawing writers block on my other works. :)

-Colly

I notice a predisposition to assume slumber party = lesbian. I now I enjoy a well written " Dad does daughter's friends" piece. And there are other variants- the neighbour, the pizza guy, the boyfriend who crashes the party, the brother.....
 
I like Colly's idea. That seems like a new twist.

Plus, I also like the whole thing that Sir mentioned...with the older brother/pizza guy who crashes the party.

I know that for me "slumber parties" ended pretty much in Jr High. Expect for a few that were thrown by my sorority.

Nothing sexual happened....except at a few boy/girl sleepovers I went to where we played "seven minutes in heaven" and "truth or dare" but it was never lesbian...and the boys always had to sleep in the other room with the dad.
~WOK
 
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oh. I liked Colly's plan. I shoulda made that clear. In fact, if she wants to workshop it here, great.
 
I will give it some attention tonight and see if I can work something up that is interesting. I am not having a lot of success these last couple of days in character building, keep coming up with caricatures or stereotypes. Tis very frustrating. Maybe something lighter like this will help me get pas my block.

-Colly
 
Colleen Thomas said:
I will give it some attention tonight and see if I can work something up that is interesting. I am not having a lot of success these last couple of days in character building, keep coming up with caricatures or stereotypes. Tis very frustrating. Maybe something lighter like this will help me get pas my block.

-Colly
I'm tied up tonight ( I wish), but will be online in the morning if you want help.
 
This is working pretty well.

Four friends who haven't seen one another in 15 years.

A journalist who recently lost a leg covering the war in Afghanistan and wants to go back home to help deal.

A single mother who stayed in the town.

A porn star and stripper.

A gay rights activist.

Alllured back to their roots by the 15th year class reunion. Problem I have is this story is going to be heavy dialogue and my dialogue blows. We will see how it all works out.

-Colly
 
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i voted for "Maybe, but always like new twists" because i think maybe you could add new and violent twists into a story. some people have told me that you can't have violence in a porn story and i tell them that that's the point - be slightly different and people won't expect it. so you could fill a house with a bunch of attractive but bitchy girls you knew in school and make them all 18 and so they do the lesbo thing but get massacred brutally at the end - very satisfying.
 
sanchopanza said:
i voted for "Maybe, but always like new twists" because i think maybe you could add new and violent twists into a story. some people have told me that you can't have violence in a porn story and i tell them that that's the point - be slightly different and people won't expect it. so you could fill a house with a bunch of attractive but bitchy girls you knew in school and make them all 18 and so they do the lesbo thing but get massacred brutally at the end - very satisfying.

I tend to think of violence as the antithesis of the erotic, but hey, different strokes for diferent folks. Good luck with your version Sp

-Colly
 
Colleen Thomas said:
This is working pretty well.

Four friends who haven't seen one another in 15 years.

A journalist who recently lost a leg covering the war in Afghanistan and wants to go back home to help deal.

A single mother who stayed in the town.

A porn star and stripper.

A gay rights activist.

Alllured back to their roots by the 15th year class reunion. Problem I have is this story is going to be heavy dialogue and my dialogue blows. We will see how it all works out.

-Colly

dialogue is me
 
i just think violence can play a part in any story so why not in a porno story? you don't have to be turned on by every sentence you read and anyway my violence is for a good reason (you'd have to read the story to understand)
 
colly you sit in a circle and spin a bottle best if done with an old fashioned glass soda bottle wine bottle ect..
The two end of the bottle will point to two people when it stops spinning the two peop;e kiss. Generally a hetro game.


Getting back to the thread topic...

I think the term sleepover or slumber party denotes adolescence as a grown woman I've stayed over at other woman's houses but we didn't call it a s;umber party or slip into sexy lingere or anything. Those are strictly made up unbeliveable scenarios.

Secondly even if the authour can manage to get the two woman sleeping in the same place he or she also has to give a feasible reason for sex. Most woman who don't suddnly have lesbian tendincies toward their friends just as I assume most men don't discover homoerotic fantasies at the onset of the 18 birthday
 
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RenzaJones said:
colly you sit in a circle and spin a bottle best if done with an old fashioned glass soda bottle wine bottle ect..
The two end of the bottle will point to two people when it stops spinning the two peop;e kiss. Generally a hetro game.


Getting back to the thread topic...

I think the term sleepover or slumber party denotes adolescence as a grown woman I've stayed over at other woman's houses but we didn't call it a s;umber party or slip into sexy lingere or anything. Those are strictly made up unbeliveable scenarios.

Secondly even if the authour can manage to get the two woman sleeping in the same place he or she also has to give a feasible reason for sex. Most woman who don't suddnly have lesbian tendincies toward their friends just as I assume most men don't discover homoerotic fantasies at the onset of the 18 birthday

Thanks, I called my little brother, the version he knows is more like truth or dare.

I don't think anyone wakes up at thrity and realizes, gee, i'm gay. I do think people who are curious could possibly find the courage to try if reunited with old freinds and in the knowledge that she won't see these friends again for some time. Significantly better than a personal add or picking someone up at a bar. There is an already established relationship and a trust factor that comes with familiarity while at the same time a kind of freedom to get away if you discover it isn't for you.

As far as a slumber party being for kids, I think if Stacy or Shannon or Christy called and said hey, we are getting together for a slumber party wanna come? I would probably say yes. I think it would be fun, even at my age to just hang out, get buzzed and relive old times, reminisce and catch up. Of course these are my best freinds from my youth and we stayed together until the end of college. We had sleepovers in each other's dorm rooms whenever one of us was facing something difficult like a break up or failing a class. Also I know all three are totally straight, so there would be no erotic compnent to it. I still think it would be fun of a kind I don't get to experience very often anymore :) Of course I have been called silly and a sentimental fool on many occasions.

-Colly
 
I'm all for the reunion idea. :)

Regarding slumber parties, heck I never had one period. We did have great girl's night in's though at Uni. Just a group of girls drinking, talking, playing silly games, dancing and pillow fighting. I guess that's the adult version to slumber parties.

Oh, and personally I don't think it'd be that hard to get two people to share a bed and cuddle up next to each other. Girls are more touchy anyway, well at least the people I know. Then it's of course another thing that nothing sexual would happen in real life.
 
RenzaJones said:
colly you sit in a circle and spin a bottle best if done with an old fashioned glass soda bottle wine bottle ect..
The two end of the bottle will point to two people when it stops spinning the two peop;e kiss. Generally a hetro game.

That's not entirely true. Yes, a group of people sit in a circle. (Typically in boy, girl, boy, girl order in insure it a "hetero" game for kids.) And yes something like a glass coke bottle is best. But, the kissing is not dependant on which TWO ends the bottle points to. In fact, only one end of the bottle points. (The neck.) So, someone decides to go first. They spin. Whoever the closest person of the "opposite" sex is to the bottle neck gets kissed by the spinner. Then the one who was kissed spins next. And so on.
 
Thanks Whisper :). I am going to go with the truth or dare version of the game, it works a lot better for what I am trying to achieve.

-Colly
 
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