Slowing it down ......

[ElectricBlue]

Thanks EB, done.

Brutal One

You dropped the request for feedback into the new stories thread. I'd stick that long post into the Feedback Forum - start your own thread:

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=1

and shorten your post in the New Stories - that's really just for the movie poster, the Feedback Forum is where the action is.