MsLinnet
Far Past Worrying
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This is an idea that seems to an idea that has been bouncing around in my head and computer and I wondered what you all think.
This is the basic idea.
A woman who is in a stable relationship but one that is going no where.
When she finds out that her partner has been looking into making a porn movie and she is to be the main caricature.
At first she is appalled by the idea but as she thinks about it the idea begins to intrigue her and takes a hand in writing it. As the story unwinds she is often reminded of how much of her life and that of the characters are entwined
Here is the way I was planning to start the story I am not sure on how to proceed as this could be very complicated as the woman in her own life starts to carrie out some of her fantasies in real life and the imagination and reality combine.
“A PORN MOVIE?”
“I don’t believe it you want me to do a porn movie a skin flick my skin at that.” I said as he opened the door.
“What’s the problem? You have had sex with loads of people in groups before, so I just thought it might be fun to watch you do something that you are really good at and earn some easy money at the same time.”
I ran the opening scene inside my head. ‘The Maid Slut’ The Camera moves into master bedroom it is late afternoon and the sun is low in the sky and the yellow tint of its rays shows off the maids legs to perfection as master James Edison opened the door and sore the virginal young maid turning the bed down. I don’t think so; I would like this a little more if you had put the idea to me in the first place.”
“But Lin it would only be for me and it’s not if it would be a hardcore porno, all ego, rough sex in allsorts of strange and odd positions.”
Over the last year or so our sex life had been somewhat stagnant, to be honest I had been looking for some way to brighten my enjoyment of sex up, but my idea was for Richard and I to do things together not to make a film me with other men or women for his pleasure and his pocket.
“I will think about it but if I say we go ahead with this I will have the final say on the script and what happens during the sex scenes, is that understood.”
“Yes of course as I alas am not Ridly Scott I am just your everyday late-blooming male pervert who loves it when a sex scene gets really kinky.” Richard said smiling at the fact that by me agreeing to think about it he was half way there to getting me to agree to the making of his porno masterpiece. I had to grit my teeth to keep from laughing, but the idea did appeal to me somewhat but there was no way that I was going to tell him that.
A week later as I lay in bed Richard handed me a lose leaf folder with half a dozen pages in it. “Read through this and tell me what you think I will make some tea and then we can go through it in detail.” I picked up the folder opening it to the first page it was written in long hand and Richards hand writing is quite neat but he writes so small that it is difficult to read sometimes.
“Am I rushing things . . . beginning the scene in bed? I cannot resist. Bed is where I'm making it these days, I don’t have many friends, and sometimes it seems I'm only limping along elsewhere.” He said somewhat dejected.
“You are fine and the friends you have are great, in bed will work fine but if we are going to do this it has to be a bit more that a quick fuck session it has to have a story don’t you think, pass me my lap top and we will go through this together.” Richard handed me my tea and passed me my lap top that was on my desk on the other side of the room.
“Ok you have this woman in bed what is she doing there is my first question”
“I don’t know.” Richard said looking me up and down.
Opening my laptop I began to type
‘Linda Grey is every bit the devoted house wife and of course, no one would ever suspect her secrets. On paper her life beautiful, meaningful, creative, and posh with a Sensitive devoted husband. She is perhaps slightly anxious about her success but it scarcely shows. She has a good marriage with one fine offspring, a remarkable un-fucked-up and clever little girl called Lisa. House and garden over looking the lake in the exclusive end of town’
“What about something like that?”
“But that is not a screen play is it?” Richard said, and I had to agree with him it was more like the start of a Mills & Boon story than a screen play.
“I see what you mean.”
‘The sun shone in through the window radiating its warmth through the room with a cascade of light Linda wakes as the telephone rang, She sat up allowing the silk sheets slide down her body showing her pert breasts to the morning sun.
Lifting the receiver she said “Hello.”
“Hi sweetie I have taken Lisa horse riding and then we are going to the club for lunch if you would like to join us about 1” Grants velvet voice sounding so reassuring and comforting that her life was good.
“Yes that will be fine I have a few things to do so I will meet you there.” Linda said putting the phone down and slid back under the sheets her hand wondering down her body as her mind wondered off to its own magical wonderland.’
“That’s better.” Richard said.
“Ok let’s say she is a real estate agent, she has a Booming career after just selling the majority of an apartment complex overlooking Hyde Park London there were not too many hassles these days. He is a wane be screenwriter, and he is always talking a Redford, Fonda, Coppola and $150,000 with a very nice percentage for his next script. She keeps the wolf from the door while he potters around doing advert scripts and government information films.
Everyone is thinking Sales Woman of this year and there is talk of her being offered a partnership in the American parent company.”
“Well that will work.” Richard said
“Life is spectacularly beautiful. But alone in her bed in her dream world bed it is best.”
I said adding that at this point in the film you would see her hand moving down under the covers and then you go off into her dream world.
“OH that was good, I can't seem to get enough of you. I'm hungry all the time.”
“It was ok but it had better be better next time or you’re gone and I find another rich house wife that wants a bit of rough.”
“I don’t think you are going to get an Oscar statue for a doorstop with this.” Richard said snapping me back from the dream that I had gone into.
I had been caught up in the joys of our relationship for a long time. And while I was on ice, a lot of girls that I chat to seem to have learned some very fancy fucking. Even the some of the bastards they describe are more fun in bed than they used to.
This is the basic idea.
A woman who is in a stable relationship but one that is going no where.
When she finds out that her partner has been looking into making a porn movie and she is to be the main caricature.
At first she is appalled by the idea but as she thinks about it the idea begins to intrigue her and takes a hand in writing it. As the story unwinds she is often reminded of how much of her life and that of the characters are entwined
Here is the way I was planning to start the story I am not sure on how to proceed as this could be very complicated as the woman in her own life starts to carrie out some of her fantasies in real life and the imagination and reality combine.
“A PORN MOVIE?”
“I don’t believe it you want me to do a porn movie a skin flick my skin at that.” I said as he opened the door.
“What’s the problem? You have had sex with loads of people in groups before, so I just thought it might be fun to watch you do something that you are really good at and earn some easy money at the same time.”
I ran the opening scene inside my head. ‘The Maid Slut’ The Camera moves into master bedroom it is late afternoon and the sun is low in the sky and the yellow tint of its rays shows off the maids legs to perfection as master James Edison opened the door and sore the virginal young maid turning the bed down. I don’t think so; I would like this a little more if you had put the idea to me in the first place.”
“But Lin it would only be for me and it’s not if it would be a hardcore porno, all ego, rough sex in allsorts of strange and odd positions.”
Over the last year or so our sex life had been somewhat stagnant, to be honest I had been looking for some way to brighten my enjoyment of sex up, but my idea was for Richard and I to do things together not to make a film me with other men or women for his pleasure and his pocket.
“I will think about it but if I say we go ahead with this I will have the final say on the script and what happens during the sex scenes, is that understood.”
“Yes of course as I alas am not Ridly Scott I am just your everyday late-blooming male pervert who loves it when a sex scene gets really kinky.” Richard said smiling at the fact that by me agreeing to think about it he was half way there to getting me to agree to the making of his porno masterpiece. I had to grit my teeth to keep from laughing, but the idea did appeal to me somewhat but there was no way that I was going to tell him that.
A week later as I lay in bed Richard handed me a lose leaf folder with half a dozen pages in it. “Read through this and tell me what you think I will make some tea and then we can go through it in detail.” I picked up the folder opening it to the first page it was written in long hand and Richards hand writing is quite neat but he writes so small that it is difficult to read sometimes.
“Am I rushing things . . . beginning the scene in bed? I cannot resist. Bed is where I'm making it these days, I don’t have many friends, and sometimes it seems I'm only limping along elsewhere.” He said somewhat dejected.
“You are fine and the friends you have are great, in bed will work fine but if we are going to do this it has to be a bit more that a quick fuck session it has to have a story don’t you think, pass me my lap top and we will go through this together.” Richard handed me my tea and passed me my lap top that was on my desk on the other side of the room.
“Ok you have this woman in bed what is she doing there is my first question”
“I don’t know.” Richard said looking me up and down.
Opening my laptop I began to type
‘Linda Grey is every bit the devoted house wife and of course, no one would ever suspect her secrets. On paper her life beautiful, meaningful, creative, and posh with a Sensitive devoted husband. She is perhaps slightly anxious about her success but it scarcely shows. She has a good marriage with one fine offspring, a remarkable un-fucked-up and clever little girl called Lisa. House and garden over looking the lake in the exclusive end of town’
“What about something like that?”
“But that is not a screen play is it?” Richard said, and I had to agree with him it was more like the start of a Mills & Boon story than a screen play.
“I see what you mean.”
‘The sun shone in through the window radiating its warmth through the room with a cascade of light Linda wakes as the telephone rang, She sat up allowing the silk sheets slide down her body showing her pert breasts to the morning sun.
Lifting the receiver she said “Hello.”
“Hi sweetie I have taken Lisa horse riding and then we are going to the club for lunch if you would like to join us about 1” Grants velvet voice sounding so reassuring and comforting that her life was good.
“Yes that will be fine I have a few things to do so I will meet you there.” Linda said putting the phone down and slid back under the sheets her hand wondering down her body as her mind wondered off to its own magical wonderland.’
“That’s better.” Richard said.
“Ok let’s say she is a real estate agent, she has a Booming career after just selling the majority of an apartment complex overlooking Hyde Park London there were not too many hassles these days. He is a wane be screenwriter, and he is always talking a Redford, Fonda, Coppola and $150,000 with a very nice percentage for his next script. She keeps the wolf from the door while he potters around doing advert scripts and government information films.
Everyone is thinking Sales Woman of this year and there is talk of her being offered a partnership in the American parent company.”
“Well that will work.” Richard said
“Life is spectacularly beautiful. But alone in her bed in her dream world bed it is best.”
I said adding that at this point in the film you would see her hand moving down under the covers and then you go off into her dream world.
“OH that was good, I can't seem to get enough of you. I'm hungry all the time.”
“It was ok but it had better be better next time or you’re gone and I find another rich house wife that wants a bit of rough.”
“I don’t think you are going to get an Oscar statue for a doorstop with this.” Richard said snapping me back from the dream that I had gone into.
I had been caught up in the joys of our relationship for a long time. And while I was on ice, a lot of girls that I chat to seem to have learned some very fancy fucking. Even the some of the bastards they describe are more fun in bed than they used to.
