skeleton needs flesh

[JamesRTickit]

I started a series but my writing skills stop at the skeleton - I can't put the flesh onto/into the subject matter.

I have outlines for several episodes/chapters.

The story is ostensibly about a man James R Ticket but in reality about the women who seem to be his subordinates.

Anyone who fancies a go please let me know.

I pass through Literotica once a week or so.

Thanks

James

 

[sunandshadow]

If you're having trouble going from outline to full story, try expanding to a more detailed outline first. Do this by adding detail about why the characters do what they do, how they feel about things and react to events, and what specifically they do. I normally do 3 iterations of a story outline - the first version is 1-3 paragraphs, the second 3-10 paragraphs, and the third 30-50 paragraphs.

 

[emap]

You know darnit I was thinking it was a story idea of a rather unique nature. A skeleton trying to get flesh to have sex.

No seriously think about it, that is one heck of an interesting story, a skeleton clanking about trying to get skinned so they can have sex. Probably with help of course. Makes for an erotic horror of course but dang I don't think it's been done before.

 

[Carnevil9]

I like emap's idea! The horny skeleton, way cool. And there are lots of opportunities for jokes about "boners" and the like......Carney

 

[sunandshadow]

Lol, or James could do what Carne does and just consider the outline to be the story, and post it that way...

 

[emap]

Dang and here I thought carny just had the dictionary copied into his word processor and just randomly used words until lit accepted it.

 

[mythtrav16]

Misleading topic title, isn't it?

You know darnit I was thinking it was a story idea of a rather unique nature. A skeleton trying to get flesh to have sex.

Me too!

I thought it was going to be about a skeleton trying to posess a woman by crawling into her vagina. Or perhaps about some ghost who posesses a woman and then goes around having sex with any man who is willing. The twist is that when the men come, at first the semen comes out, as usual, but then her tight pussy milks more and more from them, gradually drawing out all of the "life force" from their bodies. She leaves them as desicated, mummy-like corpses. Meanwhile all the life force gets directed to the ghost's skeleton and with each successive screw, more and more flesh grows on his/her bones.

 

[MsLinnet]

You know darnit I was thinking it was a story idea of a rather unique nature. A skeleton trying to get flesh to have sex.

No seriously think about it, that is one heck of an interesting story, a skeleton clanking about trying to get skinned so they can have sex. Probably with help of course. Makes for an erotic horror of course but dang I don't think it's been done before.

ok how is he going to get the skin there must be some contact with somone can a skeleton rape somone or maby he has been cursed and he is being treeted as if he has been burnt but somhow still alive

 

[emap]

Yeah I'm not so sure on that part myself. So far I've come up with hellraiser style and the victim is killed gruesomely and the skeleton baths in the blood where they regrow veins and muscle. Which of course so isn't sexy.

Though I do have another thought, kinda has to change the female part though. I was thinking female skeleton and a guy helps her, but with this new way, it's a guy skeleton and the gal is helping him. This way no blood no killing, the skeleton needs after sex juices so the gal has to basically slut around a ton of times to get him enough juices on the floor. Until he's whole again the juices sorta slosh around on him, like it's in a caste of him waiting to be filled. That's pretty literotica style don't you think?

 

[MsLinnet]

Yeah I'm not so sure on that part myself. So far I've come up with hellraiser style and the victim is killed gruesomely and the skeleton baths in the blood where they regrow veins and muscle. Which of course so isn't sexy.

Though I do have another thought, kinda has to change the female part though. I was thinking female skeleton and a guy helps her, but with this new way, it's a guy skeleton and the gal is helping him. This way no blood no killing, the skeleton needs after sex juices so the gal has to basically slut around a ton of times to get him enough juices on the floor. Until he's whole again the juices sorta slosh around on him, like it's in a caste of him waiting to be filled. That's pretty literotica style don't you think?

Intresting concept I was thinking a little bit like th mummy needing the flesh to make him whole again are we on the same lines

 

[emap]

Yep, though I'm liking my second way better.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Two skeletons? Each scrapes the flesh off a living person and plasters it on to the other's bones, like a sculptor putting clay on an armature.

 

[Black_Dahlia]

Maybe the female is some sort of demon, working to bring her master back to life. She's in the form of a hot looking woman who has no trouble getting plenty of guys to fuck her, although she has to insist that no condoms are used, for obvious reasons. Anyway, back at the tomb, the man spunk exits her pussy in the form of a scarab beetle or something, the size dependant on how much spunk was deposited. This is painful to her, but there's got to be suffering along with the pleasure. The spunk beetle then crawls into her master's mouth, and each beetle adds to his life energy, slowly returning him to his former glory.

 

[MsLinnet]

Maybe the female is some sort of demon, working to bring her master back to life. She's in the form of a hot looking woman who has no trouble getting plenty of guys to fuck her, although she has to insist that no condoms are used, for obvious reasons. Anyway, back at the tomb, the man spunk exits her pussy in the form of a scarab beetle or something, the size dependant on how much spunk was deposited. This is painful to her, but there's got to be suffering along with the pleasure. The spunk beetle then crawls into her master's mouth, and each beetle adds to his life energy, slowly returning him to his former glory.

Sounds ok to me I like the idea but not my story