Site updated today!

[switch76]

The site has finally updated today with new stories. Hopefully this will reassure the many people worried about the future of the site (well for a while anyway!).
Let's hope it inspires the authors here into lots of activity and many new threads added to stories.

 

[niceguy2002tim]

WTF!?

Hey,
yes indeed the site has been updated. But really, look at it. We get SEVEN (7) new stories after two months? Was that all the stories? Or what? Has anything else been updated? And why does the message on the main page never get updated? I am still uncertain about things. 7 new stories and nothing else, that I can see, is not enough to impress me.

On a different note, I actually added another thread to my story "Secret Agent, Sarah Banks" *link at bottom of post*

Sorry,
Tim. (niceguy2002tim)

 

[Zingiber]

I'm sure AaronWebster has a couple of stories pending. There must be dozens more (unless others' doubts were beginning to get the best of them).

Hopefully we'll see a bunch more approved and posted soon.

-Z

 

[jakelyon]

The other thing that is strange is that in reading through the new stories, something I usually enjoy, I find that I am disappointed. One of them features an underage character in the first thread, and two others have their POV screwed up switching from third to second.

I wonder if anyone even reads these stories before approving them?

It would be nice to hear from someone what the process is to have a story approved.

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Crappy stories.

Hey,
I thought the new stories actually sucked! I mean, 50 words is not an introduction. There is this one story about a "virtual reality machine" it basically asks you to create your own story. It gives a couple suggestions, but doesn't set up much. I just thought it was dumb.

I really do wonder if there will be another update this month?
-Tim

 

[daciasdesire]

Oopsy

 

[daciasdesire]

Daisy

 

[daciasdesire]

Another 14 stories have been approved on the 8th making the total of new stories to get through a grand 21.



Just having a quick look though them is see:-



Jean with the blurb "An afternoon of fun" (not giving away much, why limit it to an afternoon?)

A Long Evening with the blurb "Husband and wife make love" (An already married couple doesnt sound like it will contain that much sizzle)

Mom, a Dominate Lover (More incest)

Party of Adventurers (Sound the most promising so far)

Alternative Fantasy XXX - Revised Edition (Why not edit the orginal instead of writting a new one?)

WWE with the "blurb You evalute the Diva talent" (We must have almost a dozen wrestling stories already and this one sound completely the same)

Sleepwalker Family (Incest with a twist that could make it a little different)

Sexy School (Been done countless times before)

Adventures In a Medievil World (Could be good. I may look further into this one.)

Reader's Choice (Gives nothing away. I find if the blurb gives at least some of the stories general jist i will look into a bit further)

Vixxen 400 (Another fembot story! Done to death)

The Slow Paced Bullet (Intreging title and blurb but its closed.)

Just Another Day with the blurb "one right after another" (Come on, at least try and talk it up a bit!)

Forbidden Pleasure (More Incest)

The Program (A computer fantasy world... isnt this what Chyoo is already?)

A Wicked Elf (Its about and Elf. Did I mention he's wicked?)



Sorry if I have bagged out some very good writters and stories but the crop of new releases just seems too generic for my liking. Then again my first story The Choices We Make was pretty damn generic. Guess I'm just getting a little cynical in my old chyoo age, what with the lack of administator feedbak and the loss of some really talented writters and friends.

Dacia

 

[lilguy]

got to take credit for vixxen I'm fethishboy

That actully a repost of the old story because it was delted when I edited wrongly. So I made another one. It actully a fugitive type story.

 

[niceguy2002tim]

To Dacia...

Dacia,
I was thinking... if you find those stories not up to par, why not create one. Actually I have the perfect story in mind. You created a post in the Chyoo General forum about the "Chyoo Ball" Why not make this a story? You could even take the intro you used on the forum for the story intro. I'd add my piece as I am sure Kendahl would add his. I am sure more are coming, jakelyon will stick his entrance in there as sure will lilguy, who is apt to come to the ball wearing nothing at all. ( I had a creepy 'Carrie' flashback. lol)

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)

 

[lilguy]

promblem is most stories of chyoo nature is generic in concept

it just how you do it that make thing interesting.