Sissy pegging story too long

[Feverdreams]

soooo i have this sissy story of a husband and a wife that get into pegging and they let the wifes sister move in with them along with her black boyfriend and the husband ends up turning into his sissy slave.
my problem is that ive been writing feverously for like a week edging myself to it and itll take too long to post it in parts on here and edit and re edit. i could use some advice because i need the validation because im a basic white bitch.
its like almost 100 pages now and i really want to share it somewhere where i can get feed back on how much someone loved or got off on it etc.
IDEAS?

 

[timreh]

My guess is you're too close the material. You would likely benefit from getting someone to proofread it / edit it / suggest where the chapter breaks should be.

I'm doing something like that for someone who is writing a story for LIT that has a young trans woman as the protagonist.

 

[comegently]

100 pages is huge for a story on here.
Quality control is where many enthusiastic writers fall down. The reviewers won't do that job for you.
Even if you have no proof-reader, you have to do the best yourself.
If, the day after you write a chapter, you don't edit it drastically, you're not paying enough attention to getting it publication-ready.
The standards here are not all that far removed from what applies if you write for a magazine.
The first objective in reviewing your own work is to cut out everything that doesn't contribute to the storyline. The characters should speak through their actions and words as much as possible.

 

[kccasey]

100 pages is huge for a story on here.
Quality control is where many enthusiastic writers fall down. The reviewers won't do that job for you.
Even if you have no proof-reader, you have to do the best yourself.
If, the day after you write a chapter, you don't edit it drastically, you're not paying enough attention to getting it publication-ready.
The standards here are not all that far removed from what applies if you write for a magazine.
The first objective in reviewing your own work is to cut out everything that doesn't contribute to the storyline. The characters should speak through their actions and words as much as possible.

I believe this is great advice, I could use this advice myself.