Silk stockings

[silky-bi-girl]

I love to wear silk stockings. I love the way they feel on my long, slender legs, and I love the attention I get from men and women when I slip them on. I get horny just thinking of them. Is it just me, or do others feel the same way?

Here's my story

I'd love to here your stocking stories, and I'd love to hear what you think of mine.
Love Silky
discoemily@hotmail.com

 

[sirrober]

damn

Good story keep up the work we need more like this.

 

[lightnin]

wow, let me catch my breath! Great characters, good writing - very visual. Hope to see more of your stories.

 

[Raging Whoremoans]

Silky-bi-girl,

Good descriptions for the most part and the visuals were there. I enjoy innovative ideas in the bedroom and up until the part where she pulled the condom out, it was enticing and believable.

However, there were many things that just didn't click for me. The condom over the stocking made me think of instant discomfort and messy stockings. I love a nice pair of stockings as much as the next girl, but the thought of unrolling a tight rubber over woven material brings on thoughts of itchy binding and some mild chafing. Not being male, I suppose this isn't a qualified opinion but those were my thoughts.

A slight over use of the word 'member'. I liked the intensity she was feeling but the instantaneous orgasm as his cock bottomed out was more than a little unbelievable. As were the two subsequent orgasms in very short order. And the fact that she so callously hopped up and put her stockings on, leaving him on the brink left me wondering if he wandered through dinner and the symphony with a raging hard on.

All in all, I think your ideas are good and you have the ability to present them well, but too many things made it fall apart for me. Don't be afraid to write more. A little description of how his body reacted when the stocking was manipulating his cock, or more details on how the wonder of it all affected her would add plenty to the story.

Keep writing...but don't hold back. Paint all of the picture, you've got what it takes.

~ R W

p.s. I normally don't care for nameless characters, but the anonymity didn't detract at all from this story.

 

[silky-bi-girl]

Thanks Raging. It's always nice to have constructive criticism, especially from the female perspective. You make some great points. The story is meant to be a long, slow tease for the man, and yes, he does have a raging hard-on through dinner and the symphony. All of this comes to a head in chapter two.
He gets his revenge
(would love to hear your thoughts on the rest of the story.
Silky